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Posts by haris_ibrahimm
Name: Abdul Haris Ibrahim
Joined: May 11, 2017
Last Post: May 11, 2017
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haris_ibrahimm   
May 11, 2017
Writing Feedback / Empowering Gadgets to Access World [2]

writing task 2: Nowadays, parents often let their children play a lot with computers, and tablets in order to improve their technological skills. Do the advantages of the use of these devices from an early age outweigh the disadvantages?

kids with high-tech devices in their hands



In digital native era, introducing gadgets to children in early age to improve their technological abilities are often conducted by their parents. Due to, they will realize early of the benefits of advance technology, such as computers and tablets which used by them to spend much of their times. Personally, i strongly believe this will lead them to achieve some merits by empowering gadgets to access some information around the world than demerits.

To begin with, the development of technology by create some new tools likely, tablets and computers will make information are accessible. Taken an example, merely the people who stay in their home still travel in digital world by using some gadgets. This show, that the technology be able to open children's mind as an advantages to aware early of the sophisticated technology. Hence, it may provide the children a way to recognize how easy the world to access.

Furthermore, some devices which children utilize are portability to operate. For instance, tablets and smartphones are used to surf in internet which is saved many information to be accessed. It is also operated by walking around your town or do some activities at the same time, while use it to explore news anywhere.Therefore, the utilizing of it may help them in their activity without trapped in front of computers in their house as a disadvantage.

To sum up, early recognizing some devices to children will bring some benefits to their own life. They can access any information which they need, whereas their solely use their gadgets and it is portability to bring wherever they wanted. Then, it is the way to empower the advance technology to improve their skills.
haris_ibrahimm   
May 11, 2017
Writing Feedback / Various cases of people living abroad [4]

Let me give your advice, pay attention with the connective word like between. Not between to, but between, and.
Also, be careful on your spelling. Not theseare, the correct one is "these are"
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