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Posts by he227803
Name: Hessen elsherif
Joined: Jun 29, 2017
Last Post: Jul 2, 2017
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From: USA
School: indian hills

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he227803   
Jun 29, 2017
Writing Feedback / Some people are in favour to live in a house, others see more advantages living in a flat [5]

House or a flat? Different opinions



Nowadays, it is argued whether it is better to live in a house or in a flat. Some people hold the opinion that houses are more convenient to live in because of more space and luxury, while others assert that living in a flat is more practical. This essay supports the second point of view and I will illustrate in the next paragraphs that living in a flat is much better because it is cheaper and easier to clean.

Firstly, living in a house is an attractive choice for many people who seek spaciousness and extra amenities. But, cost is a very important factor also to consider when you choose your dwelling place. It is well known that houses are more expensive than flats in the same living districts. According to a survey done by rent., the average American house costs $50,000 more than the average flat of the same number of rooms. The fact that all the building's bills are shared between the tenants makes it always a better choice for people with tighter budget.

Secondly, household tasks are very energy and time demanding which makes people think about having a small place to live in and save a lot of their time rather than owning a big place with so much cleaning and maintenance responsibilities. The average house consists of at least 3 rooms, lounge, kitchen and garden, not counting other amenities like swimming pool. Obviously, this would require at least two persons for cleaning weekly and still a cumbersome task. in addition, busy people and students don't have this time to spend taking care of their houses and so a small apartment will be a perfect solution for them.

To conclude, I don't think that owning a house has more advantages than owning a flat, on the contrary, a lot of times people are inclined towards buying a small flat because it is cheaper and easier to clean and handle.
he227803   
Jul 2, 2017
Writing Feedback / Can we use animals for our personal benefit or this is unacceptable? [4]

hello,
i think you need to practice more especially your Grammar.
next are few corrections that i could think of.

Some individual believe that human (humans) should use animal(animals) for their personal benefit while other (others) argues(argue) that this is a bad practice. This essay will discuss the( delete the) both aspects of the argument. In my opinion, it is necessary to use animal (animals) for scientific and security purpose (purposes) other than this they should be allowed to live freely (safely).
he227803   
Jul 2, 2017
Letters / You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. The letter in this case. [5]

getting an info about London seminar



Dear Sir/ Madam

I am writing to you to ask about the seminar that will be held in London next week, the 13th January about new techniques in production management.

I work as a production manager in one of the largest home appliances manufacturing companies in Iran. I have been a manager for five years now, I am always curious about updating myself with the most recent knowledge in my field. So, I am interested in attending this seminar to know and learn the new techniques in workers management and manufacturing lines.

Since I have not got over some information from your advertisement. It would be appreciated if you would tell me in which date the seminar will be held. also, I need to know about seminar program and the type of accommodation you provide for participants. and the last question would be about the cost of registering for the seminar.

I look forward to hearing from you in the near future
Yours faithfully
John
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