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Name: Ahmed Waled
Joined: Jul 26, 2017		 Last Post: Jul 26, 2017
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Jul 26, 2017
Essays / PARENT-CHILD RELATONSHIP THESIS TASK! Based on Morrison's "A Mercy" [2]

Hey, so I've read a novel called "A Mercy" by Toni Morrison and I wrote out a thesis for my essay. Please check it out:

parent-child relationship



Father Reverend, Floren's mom, and Sorrow prove that parent-child relationships are full of sacrifices.
Thanks!
m9511075   
Jul 26, 2017
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing task 2 - Same products around the world [3]

Hey,
You should only talk about one side. In your introduction, you consider it to be a positive development, so throughout your essay you should only be talking about the positive developments of having same products all around the world. As well, in your conclusion paragraph you should be restating your mentioned points and your thesis.
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