Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 1 : the table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries 1930-1980 [4]

the imprisonment rate in some countries across the world

The bar chart illustrates the numbers for imprisonment over a period of 50 years in Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, United State, and Canada. They pivot represents amounts of prisoners in thousands.

Five countries from 1930 to 1980 show some dramatic fluctuations, such as New Zealand, its prisoners come to 100,000 in 1930, then in 1940 fall in 55,000, and in 1950 fall again to 50,000. For the other three, year 1960. 1970, and 1980 New Zealand bear 65,000, 70,000, and 90,000 prisoners respectively.

In 1970, 95,000 is amount for imprisons of United State, to 135,000 in 1980, the highest of all five countries. While Canada bear prisoners in the range of 120,000 in 1930 to 85,000 in 1970.

Great Britain's prisoners ranged from 85,000, its highest number in 1980, to 30,000 in 1930, the lowest of all five countries. Likewise, prisons of Australia in the range of 70,000 in 1930, to 45,000 in 1950.

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Writing Feedback / The imprisonment over a period of 50 years in five different areas - diagram analysis [3]

the figures for imprisonment in five countries

The bar chart below illustrates diagram for imprisonment over a period of 50 years in five different areas.

It is clear that the greatest number of prisoners between 1930 1nd 1980 is United States. We can also see quantities for imprisonment in five countries trend to rise by every 10 years period.

In each of decade shown on the chart amount of prisoners in America increase except in 1950 and 1970. Roughly a rise 10000 to 40000 of prisoners reported in US from 1930 to 1980. Meanwhile, in Great Britain number for imprisonment always grows reached 85000 in 1980.

In the year 1970, the figures of imprisonment are almost same in three countries. They are Great Britain, Australia and New Zealand. Before 1970, the fluctuation numbers of these three countries. In the year 1980, the diagram for prisoners relatively surge in Great Britain and New Zealand. In other hand, Canadian prisoners decline between 1930 and 1980.

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