Honglinh1996
Apr 27, 2019
Writing Feedback / Write a paragraph about your accomlishment you have had [3]
My success as to be at the top of class help me develop many different important qualities. First of all, I've got a highly developed my sense of confidence. Since I was little child, I was naturally getting shy. Because I was really not good in studying at my primary school, I didn't make friend with anyone in my class and talk to them. But my life has changed when I went to Hồ chí minh city and began a new life at a high school which is near my living area. I was determined to study very hard so as to be at the top of my class. And, eventually I made it at the end of the first year, I was in the first class. I was so proud of myself while I talked to my accomplishment with my classmate that makes me have lots of friends. Futher more, It can't be denied that the persistent is one of factors for my success. During the award ceremony, I remembered the time how hard I tried when I was studying by myself at home. I just spent three hours on sleeping at every night, at times I wanted to give it up, but on the second thought I still keep going. After that considerable success, I realised that people might be develop our good characters through resolving difficulties to accomplish goals in the life.
persistency and sense of confidence
My success as to be at the top of class help me develop many different important qualities. First of all, I've got a highly developed my sense of confidence. Since I was little child, I was naturally getting shy. Because I was really not good in studying at my primary school, I didn't make friend with anyone in my class and talk to them. But my life has changed when I went to Hồ chí minh city and began a new life at a high school which is near my living area. I was determined to study very hard so as to be at the top of my class. And, eventually I made it at the end of the first year, I was in the first class. I was so proud of myself while I talked to my accomplishment with my classmate that makes me have lots of friends. Futher more, It can't be denied that the persistent is one of factors for my success. During the award ceremony, I remembered the time how hard I tried when I was studying by myself at home. I just spent three hours on sleeping at every night, at times I wanted to give it up, but on the second thought I still keep going. After that considerable success, I realised that people might be develop our good characters through resolving difficulties to accomplish goals in the life.