Writing Feedback / The chart reveals the data about global sales of IT products (2000 - 2003) [5]

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the chart.

A glance at the provided chart reveals the data about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Generally, the sales of games software and DVD went up through years. Meanwhile, that of CDs had tendency to decrease.

We can see that, the sales of games software from 2000 to 2003 increased slightly. In detail, they rose about 2 billion each year and reached approximately 19 billion in 2003.

When it comes to DVD, the number of people buying DVD/videos also climbed, but more sharply. In 2000, the sales of DVD/videos only accounted for under 20 billion. But then, within 3 years that number rocketed and reached over 30 billion in 2003, indicating a growth of 2 billion, compared to first year.

By contrast, the number of CDs was sold started to go down minimally. During the same time period, the sales declined around 1 to 2 billion each year, from 35 billion in 2000 to about 32 million in 2003.

Thanks for reading, please give me some comments to correct my mistakes and rec for me some synonym to prevent repeating words.

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  The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.
  

Writing Feedback / IELTS1: indicators of economic and social condition of Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire [2]

report for a university lecturer describing the table

A glance at the table illustrates information about indicators of economic and social of Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire in 1994. Overall, it is clear that the figures for all four indicators were consistently higher in Canada and Japan. As can be seen from the table, Japan led in annual income per person with 15 760$, this was followed by 11 100$ in Canada and 160$ in Peru. The country having the lowest income was Zaire with only 130$.

In term of life expectancy at birth, it was higher in wealthier countries such as Japan accounted for 78, Canada took up 76, Peru and Zaire respectively took 51 and 47. This indicated that richer countries are able to put more money into health care than poorer ones.

The amount of calories consumed daily per person roughly followed the same ranking. Canadians had 3326 calorie per day, while the Japanese took 2846 calories. The corresponding figures for Peru and Zaire were 1927 and 1749, respectively.

In adult literacy rate, both Canada and Japan made up 99%, followed by Peru with 68% and Zaire, the country always having the lowest data had a literacy rate of 34%.

Thanks for reading. Please correct my mistakes and suggest many ideas about writing because it's quite difficult to describe a table that information is almost always in a sequence.

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