Hanip Abdul
Dec 13, 2019
Writing Feedback / Visitors numbers to Ashdown Museum before and after its renovation [3]
Hey guys,
I'll try to give you some feedback related to your writing.
Your introduction covers all the elements related to those cited in the questions, so I would say that it is good intro.
Well, When it comes to your overview, I'd probably say it is quite good as well.
i can really easy read your essay without any map. se let me give you score based on the band descriptors.
Note :
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Task Achievement : 7
Coheren and Cohesion : 7
Lexical Recource : 7
Grammatical range and accuracy: 7
Hey guys,
I'll try to give you some feedback related to your writing.
Your introduction covers all the elements related to those cited in the questions, so I would say that it is good intro.
Well, When it comes to your overview, I'd probably say it is quite good as well.
i can really easy read your essay without any map. se let me give you score based on the band descriptors.
Note :
... slumped to 15%, while ... (you need to put comma before while)
Task Achievement : 7
Coheren and Cohesion : 7
Lexical Recource : 7
Grammatical range and accuracy: 7