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Name: Thinh Nguyen
Joined: Mar 3, 2020
Last Post: Mar 6, 2020
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ThinhNguyen   
Mar 3, 2020
Writing Feedback / From maps: compare the older road access to the hospital with the renovated one, after development [4]

The two maps illustrate the changes of road access to the hospital in two different years - 2007 and 2010.


Overall, one principal development that can be seen is the transportation infrastructure and the construction of the new public parking area and the new bus station.

In 2010, one roundabout has been constructed on the way to the city hospital along with another one at the intersection of Hospital Road and City Road; while the other has been built on the North side of the City Road near the second roundabout as mentioned.

Back in 2007, the parking area on the East side of the Hospital Road was for both staff and public uses; however, a new parking for public cars has been built, making the old one for-staff-only. Furthermore, all six bus stops along the Hospital Road to the hospital have been removed and replaced with a new bus station on the West side of the Hospital Road and connected with the two roundabouts on the same road as mentioned.



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ThinhNguyen   
Mar 6, 2020
Writing Feedback / [Writing task 2 IELTS] The responsibility of residents and government in protecting the environment [5]

you have done very well providing an appropriate answer to the task; however, there is one thing that concerned me:
"For instance, according to a study, India has seen..."

I think this part is supposed to be with the government's importance, but it was used for the people's. When I read the whole essay, this part troubled me from understanding your first idea. Thus, I think it would be better if you take another example as a subsequent. Thank you.
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