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Posts by Pao Thang
Name: Trang Luu Bao Thang
Joined: Nov 1, 2020
Last Post: Nov 24, 2020
Threads: 2
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From: Viet Nam
School: Ton Duc Thang

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Pao Thang   
Nov 14, 2020
Writing Feedback / Many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. [4]

technology and socialising



It is true that the young generation these days is most likely to use social networks or other online platforms for meeting others instead of face-to-face, which makes so many conveniences. Some people believe that it will bring negative effects to young people including me. On the other hand, to encourage those for restricting this bad habit, if it has the school education and family care.

School education plays an important role in organizing students' mindsets and communicating way with others. For encouraging teenagers, school education needs to pay more attention to the activity point in school instead of completing the academic point. In addition, they should generate more and more school activities. For example, the English contest, invention competition, culture exchange,... In this way, that not only helps students improve their social connection with others in person but also can enhance their physical and mental statements comprehensively. Moreover, teachers ought to take care of their children if they are abusing technology platforms and teach them how important face-to-face communication is.

To be similar, the family should be a good pattern because of the strong impression of their children. They should create opportunities for their children's outside activities. For instance, generating family outdoor activities such as picnics, going fishing, that will make the family be closed and avoid their teenagers abusing technology so much. The parents have to often talk to their children after school or dinner for creating a good habit to share with others in person.

Teenagers could not resist the attraction of technology, especially with purposes for meeting with others. It has a negative for children's development. To solve this issue that needs support from school education and family.
Pao Thang   
Nov 16, 2020
Writing Feedback / Computers in school will never be able to replace the teacher? [4]

Firstly, you need to pay more attention to the minimum word requirement of at least 250 words. Second, you should add your point of view from your personal experience or knowledge, if you use the information from a survey that you need to address where you get that. Next, students do not do their homework without the teacher's strictness that is right just for the Vietnamese students, if you use this point maybe the examiner couldn't agree with you. Finally, you ought to make more various grammar structures and tense for getting a high point.
Pao Thang   
Nov 24, 2020
Writing Feedback / People think teachers no longer play important roles in classrooms [4]

Can technology replace teachers?



These days, the computer is sure to have far-reaching effects on all fields, especially education. Many people claim that with the development of computers, teachers do not have an important role anymore in the classroom. Taking a look at other aspects, teachers still play an essential role for students that they can not be replaced.

First of all, the interaction between students and teachers is vital for learning. Also, in some particular class, students still need someone to help and guide them to study and practice. For instance, It's an onerous task for the learning in creative and thinking class if they do not have teachers guide and encourage them at the beginning and obviously, computers do not solve this problem.

On top of that, experienced teachers know what materials and structured courses to choose from. For example, the studying ability of students is not similar that the teachers who have been approaching and getting close with them as the result the teacher know what are suitable books, speed and methods of teaching for their students. Moreover, teachers who have a long time to get along with students that they understand and may help them to solve the academic problem of theirs, also monitor every slight change in students' attitude, to respond to them whenever they show of frustration and impatience.

To sum up, the computer is popularly used in school for so many conveniences that make students interesting and comfortable in learning activities. However, teachers also bring some special benefits to the student and they still keep a necessary role in the school.
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