Writing Feedback / IELTS writing task 1 which is talk about producing steam [4]

You wrote well, but I think huzaifa is write , you should write with sequence and change .... According to reactor section to something more concise and check grammar as well.

Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 1: Forested area covered over different continents in the world (Table) [4]

Check your grammar and use the significantly and other phrases like although and meanwhile , it will help you to score well.