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Name: Rhea Dsouza
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School: The Millennium School Dubai

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dorkystudent   
Dec 3, 2020
Undergraduate / "You're such a mom" - Yours and others opinion about yourself [2]

Tell us about who you are.


How would your family, friends, and/or members of your community describe you?


"You're such a mom." says my best friend, Alena as I put her baby sister to sleep. So, I guess my friends would describe me as a big carebear. I think this comes from my ineluctable need to show affection. This is my most evident feature- to have a big heart and tend for people. I come from a background that deems it necessary to not show emotion. To be practical, and work with the mind. But I like to challenge this unconventional thinking. So what if we work with both heart and mind? This is how I function. We had a science competition recently, and at least 50-60 students had participated in it. While everyone chose traditional topics, like the working of robots or the generation of electricity, I wanted to appeal to the heart, that suggested I do something that not only educates but also influences. I decided to do my project on marijuana. Yes, the forbidden marijuana. Did you know that marijuana could be used to kill cancer cells? I didn't. I must say, that the research I did was something I was most proud of. I'm proud of it because I chose to be different that evening. I chose to bring a taboo topic to life and deliver it in its uncustomary positive sense. I chose to fuel my inquisitiveness with the twin motive of changing perspective. As humans, we tend to overlook the positives and focus on the negatives, and I wanted to change this. We did not end up winning that night, but I'm sure I impressed my judge and my fellow contestants with the facts I brought to the table.

Personally, I feel like the intro of this paragraph and the ending do not match. What do you think?
dorkystudent   
Dec 3, 2020
Writing Feedback / People often do not interact with neighbors and this is harming communities. Causes and solutions? [3]

1. For example, a career like doctor medicine would / For example, a doctor would

2. and this fuels ... and an indifferent attitude.

3. ... not spending time on communicating ...

4. ... to devote their lives to keep up ...

5. ... resulted from a lack of communication ...

6. ... of buildings in an interactive way.

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