Writing Feedback / Task 1: the table shows the percentage of main types of dwelling in three areas [2]

select and report the main features from the graph

The table below shows the percentage of main types of dwelling in Victoria, the Northern Territory and Tasmania . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The figure illustrates the ratio of major types of residence including house, semi-attached house, flat and other in three different places throughout from 2001 to 2006. overall , the residents ' preferences for the living place in all of these areas had changed slightly by 2006, compared with the 2001 figures.

Obviously, the house regularly was selected highest in three regions by residents over a period of 5 years. In Tasmania , there was a remarkable increase in in amount of house at 88% in 2001 and 2006% , compared with Victoria, the Northern Territory were decrease slightly from 79% to 76% and 65% and 63% respectively .Nevertheless, the other categories were much smaller, in semi-attached house tended to live in the Northern Territory , there was a significant drop approximately at from 13% to 15% respectively and victoria at 11% and 12% and in tasmania ocuppies 3% and 4%.

Apparently, the number of flats still constructed for people live in three regions but not pay attention more than house and semi-attached house and just accounted smaller consists of 9% to 10% in victoria , 8% to 11% in the northern territory and 7% to 6% in tasmania .Finally, the other types of residence declined considerably at 1% to 2% respectively in victoria and 2% to 1% in Tasmania but the northern Territory, the other types of dwelling toward to grow up substantially approximately 14% to 11% from 2001 to 2006.

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Writing Feedback / Task2: the quality of life in the large cities is becoming worse ( cause and solve ) ? [3]

In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is becoming worse.

What causes this problem? What measure can be taken to solve it?

The quality of dwellers 's life is a slight drop day by day in a huge metropolitan area of a lot of countries . This essay will look at the reasons behind this and give some possible measures to overcome the problems of city dwellers.

The underlying cause of residents ' life tends to go down slightly due to tax income increasing day by day so people who have a difficult life could be able to pay tax and gradually they will become homeless and live on either the road or corner . Moreover, they might not purchase some foods and clothes because the taxes are too high . Another causes related to infrastructure which is a complicated issues that almost people pay attention to , some engineers constructed high-rise building with poor quality materials and then few years away, there are some apartments , detached house become worse such as electric line is broken after over a period of 2 years used , peeling wall and a lot of problems will be occur in the future .

One primary solve the quality of life is decreasing tax for almost dwellers in the place and bring about policy to promote residents ' life and offer preferential policies to people such as in Covid -19 , economic almost all countries declined significantly and residents not only without have a career but also make money so they might not pay the huge tax income and then it is considerably the government have to set up a fund to support the financial of needy people . Another solution to this problem is for the government to manage other infrastructures seriously and punish unprofessional engineers who constructed buildings without experience and enthusiasm .

In conclusion, the underlying cause of residents ' life tends to go down slightly due to tax income increasing . Moreover, one primary solution to the quality of life is decreasing tax for almost all dwellers in the place . Personally, the government should have a useful plan to help people upgrade their quality of life.