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Apr 14, 2022
Undergraduate / GKS scholarship Personal statement 2023 for Medicine [4]
This is my first essay. I want your opinions so I that I can improve.
I always thought that everyone's future is already decided. Whatever we do and whichever we path we chose life takes us to the 'already decided future'. During my school days I was so fascinated by my friend's words and their goals and plans that I forgot what I want. I believed that going to the top college is all that we had to do. To be honest that was the first time I heard the name of IIT.
But being brought in a family which is largely inclined towards teaching and biology related fields I had a great hold on conceptual things. But I don't say I wasn't in others. I actually found these subjects easy to grasp and understand and yet I didn't realize what I truly want. After entering the college, that is when I learnt what actually choosing a course and a major is. Then all of a sudden my mind shifted from engineering field to medical field.
I got more and more interested in medical field. I always found human body as the greatest mystery. Also I had seen accidents, operations and surgeries in my family. My aunt is a doctor and a huge impact was from her since my childhood. Ever since I joined my college she always had a desire that I would join medical. Maybe she saw inside me and my true desire that I have.
It's been 2 years since I have realized my true aim an started working towards it. I tired getting some basic information about how actually this field works. The more I started to know about medicine, the more fascinated I was and more determined was my heart and brain to achieve something in medicine. Out of all the parts of our body, brain attracted me the most. I don't know why but I really wanted to study more about brain. I found it more mysterious than anything. And that is when becoming a Neurologist became my ultimate goal. According to me being a doctor means studying all your life. Every surgery, every patient is different and we get to learn from each and everything. Even though becoming neurologist wont stop my urge to move forward, from where I'm seeing right now it is my biggest aim.
About studying outside my country, I was always on my toes to go out to different countries and study. I used to do a lot of research about studying not only just in Korea. Maybe the thing that made me choose Korea over the other countries is the advanced technology and ideology that it has in all fields whether it is medicine or arts and communication.
And I can say that I will put all my efforts to improve the link between my county and Korea. In the future since everything is getting upgrading and development is at it's top speed I want to play a role in the betterment of relations between the countries and succeed in my field I have chosen and help people with the knowledge I will acquire in the nest few years.
This is my first essay. I want your opinions so I that I can improve.
KNOWING YOUR TRUE GOAL AND DESIRE
I always thought that everyone's future is already decided. Whatever we do and whichever we path we chose life takes us to the 'already decided future'. During my school days I was so fascinated by my friend's words and their goals and plans that I forgot what I want. I believed that going to the top college is all that we had to do. To be honest that was the first time I heard the name of IIT.
But being brought in a family which is largely inclined towards teaching and biology related fields I had a great hold on conceptual things. But I don't say I wasn't in others. I actually found these subjects easy to grasp and understand and yet I didn't realize what I truly want. After entering the college, that is when I learnt what actually choosing a course and a major is. Then all of a sudden my mind shifted from engineering field to medical field.
I got more and more interested in medical field. I always found human body as the greatest mystery. Also I had seen accidents, operations and surgeries in my family. My aunt is a doctor and a huge impact was from her since my childhood. Ever since I joined my college she always had a desire that I would join medical. Maybe she saw inside me and my true desire that I have.
It's been 2 years since I have realized my true aim an started working towards it. I tired getting some basic information about how actually this field works. The more I started to know about medicine, the more fascinated I was and more determined was my heart and brain to achieve something in medicine. Out of all the parts of our body, brain attracted me the most. I don't know why but I really wanted to study more about brain. I found it more mysterious than anything. And that is when becoming a Neurologist became my ultimate goal. According to me being a doctor means studying all your life. Every surgery, every patient is different and we get to learn from each and everything. Even though becoming neurologist wont stop my urge to move forward, from where I'm seeing right now it is my biggest aim.
About studying outside my country, I was always on my toes to go out to different countries and study. I used to do a lot of research about studying not only just in Korea. Maybe the thing that made me choose Korea over the other countries is the advanced technology and ideology that it has in all fields whether it is medicine or arts and communication.
And I can say that I will put all my efforts to improve the link between my county and Korea. In the future since everything is getting upgrading and development is at it's top speed I want to play a role in the betterment of relations between the countries and succeed in my field I have chosen and help people with the knowledge I will acquire in the nest few years.