Writing Feedback / Describe the table in task 1, about television viewing figures [2]

numbers of sports watched in the tv

The table shows how many people in millions watch sports on television. It shows the number of viewers for 4 sports by 4 countries
America has biggest viewers in A countries with 25.2 millions. Tennis is more popular than other 3 sports: golf, motor racing, Athletics. Motor racing is not popular because only 12.7 millions people watch it. However, In Britain the number of people watch motor racing reach 6.4 million, account for more 50 percentage of viewer for motor racing. Golf is also popular: There are $11.2 millions viewer in America but it is not as popular in the other countries. There are 16.9 viewer who watch Athetics and it is quite same in 4 countries.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - I need some comments about grammar. Topic is about the use of the internet [4]

internet users as percentage of population

The line graph compares the use of the internet of residents in three separate countries over a period of 10 years starting from 1999.
It is obvious that internet access of residents went through a growth in all three countries from 1999 to 2009 with a dramatic rise was seen in Canada. Another remarkable is that the percentage of people having access to the internet in Mexico was consistently lowest over the period surveyed.

In 1999, 20% Americans connected the internet, twice as high as the figure for Canadians, while Mexico witnessed only 5% people accessing to the internet.
From that time onwards, there was a considerable increase in the use of the internet in Canada and this figure exceeded that of America at about 45% in 2002, after which the former kept going up to the highest point of 100% at the end of period. A similar upward trend was seen in the USA with a fourfold rise to 80% in 2009, while Mexico seen a gradual upward trend in the proportion of residents surfing the internet and this figure peaked at 40% in 2009.

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