Writing Feedback / "Why people attend to universities or colleges" - Toefl IBT [3]

I am from Azerbaijan.it is the the subject of my essay. Why people attend to universities or colleges

Generally, people from all nations try to attend universities. Each human who wants to attend college has its own reason to do that. I want to make such argument that there many different reasons. For example, career reason, new friends, enjoy student life and so on.

Firstly, the main reason to attend college in prepare for career. People who wants to make career he or she need first to educate in the field which he or she wants to make career. The person needs to know about theorical job. He or she can learn about that in the college. For example, I can say about my cousin. He wanted to make career as surgeon when he was young. Afterwards he attended to Med university. After graduating university he started to work in hospital as surgeon. Now he has made good career in his job.

Secondly, other important reason increased knowledge. There are such kind of people who wants to increase his or her knowledge in the field. Therefore, that person is going to attend to college to study that field. Suck kind of people want to increase their intellectual level. There is an old saying from Lenin «study,study and again study». It has great advantages. Such as to be more modern person.

Conclusively, i assume that people attend university to make career. Cause it has two advantages. Tey will get knowledge and also will make career. I can write from myself I attended university to make good career in Bussiness.

Writing Feedback / The important lesson is life. The best teachers for the life are parents. [4]

Parents are best teacher. This is an old saying. Some people agree with this idea, some do not agree. There is idea exist. The important lesson is life. The best teachers for the life are parents.

The most important subject is life. The best teachers for that subject are parents. Parents prepare their children to the life. Children learn from parents how to deal with problem. They get good advices that they use in their future life. For example I can write about my teacher. He always advices me to hear my parent. He says that I can get good advices from my parents. Eventually, I can benefit from that advices in the future. He has done like that. Therefore, he has made good career and succeeded in life.

Generally, people should count their parents as their life teacher. Cause they are more experienced life. They could teach us about life from their own practice. This information could be very useful. Cause, this information has been proven. People learn from their mistakes in their life not to make that mistake again. Therefore, children should learn from their parents to make fewer mistakes.

To my point I agree with this idea that, parents are the best teacher. They teach the most important subject. This subject is very hard and changeable