vincenthessel
May 10, 2010
Poetry / ESL art poem - Mona Lisa [9]
hi i need to write a poem for ESL of how the picture made me feel. i choose mona lisa.
I am in the woods and saw it in the woods
is that a rabbit or a basketball?
Rabbits hop and
B-balls bounce and
once I had a rabbit that resembles Shaq
its moving in the bush
and it is orange
so probably a rabbit but maybe a basketball
what does it sound like?
What do I feel like?
Is she a man or a woman or a basketball?
There is an ancient french poetry creature
it is calledhaicouxIt is about the basketball:
Boing Boing Dribble Jump
Omellette au Fromage et Baguette
The ears don't go in the hoop
But why is she looking like that?
Is she looking
if it is a rabbit or a basketball?
thanks you i just want to know whats wrong and how to make it better thx again bye
edit- oh no this should be in poetry but now i cant move it sorry sorry sorry!
hi i need to write a poem for ESL of how the picture made me feel. i choose mona lisa.
I am in the woods and saw it in the woods
is that a rabbit or a basketball?
Rabbits hop and
B-balls bounce and
once I had a rabbit that resembles Shaq
its moving in the bush
and it is orange
so probably a rabbit but maybe a basketball
what does it sound like?
What do I feel like?
Is she a man or a woman or a basketball?
There is an ancient french poetry creature
it is calledhaicouxIt is about the basketball:
Boing Boing Dribble Jump
Omellette au Fromage et Baguette
The ears don't go in the hoop
But why is she looking like that?
Is she looking
if it is a rabbit or a basketball?
thanks you i just want to know whats wrong and how to make it better thx again bye
edit- oh no this should be in poetry but now i cant move it sorry sorry sorry!