Writing Feedback / Factors contributing to job satisfaction and its importance [5]

This is my first writing in this forum.Need some feedback

Job satisfaction is really a big factor for a professional because it brings enjoyment while working which in turns brings happiness in life.
Job satisfaction basically depends upon two most important factors. Firstly salary and secondly the working environment, which include work culture, nature of work, colleagues etc. People working with a middle class background are generally influenced by the first factor. Before modernization people works without knowing about job satisfaction. In this case a question arises is job satisfaction a reality? For someone it just a source of income but for someone its more than that. The second factor seems to be the most important of all. Working in a good environment is also important for a healthy mind. A man with a very healthy pay may not satisfied with a job where he did not find a suitable working environment.

In fact there are people who spent their life time working with the same organization without thinking about satisfaction. On the other hand, some people switch over to other organizations in search of satisfaction. In such case the organization also plays an important role. Looking after all the facilities, and wages/pay. Some other factors such as family responsibility, health and growth also play an important part. From my point of view the second factor is the most important one. Finally I like to conclude that it's very difficult to get satisfied with one individuals professional life.

Writing Feedback / 'cultural monuments' Why people visit a museum while visiting a new place? [5]

Hi...i have gone through the article Why people visited a museum while visiting a new place posted by Vaishali . As I am trying to develop my English so I tried the same topic in different way.

Need some feedback and correction...

It's human nature, human curiosity or enthusiasm to know the history of a place while traveling for the first time and apart from books museum is a perfect place to know about all these things

A museum is a place where a large number of interesting and valuable objects, such as work of art or historic items are kept, studied and displayed for public.

It is the collection of those entire cultural monuments which we should know while visiting a new place. Cultural, traditional as well as religious variation occurs from place to place and these factors don't changes in one day. Its take a long time to create culture and tradition, and which were in a reforming trend from the time of our ancestor and in a museum all those documentation and heritage proof are kept from which we come to know about all this thing. War histories, revolutionary political change of that region are some of the things which are kept in a museum. And to know about all these thing visitors always visit a museum. In some cases it becomes famous tourist spot for its artistic creativity and becomes a world heritage site.

In ancient time many traveler used to visit different kingdom and write manuscript which gives detail knowledge about the place of that time. Its cultural, political, traditional history, about our ancestor, their lifestyle, food, dresses etc. Now these scripts are preserved in museum for public.

So I like to conclude that, a museum is a perfect place to spent holiday. Museum is the witness of our past and present. It has come to represent the mirror of a region