Undergraduate / "Confessions of a poor student" [20]

This is my humble feedback on your essay. My advice is that maybe you can try writing your essay in a more formal way since you're applying to a college. :) Good luck!

Undergraduate / UC Essay 1 - A library full of children [6]

The children in the library have fueled my passion for humanitarian services in general. I have acquired a much more sincere attitude toward my responsibilities for other people after personally witnessing the positive influence of my effortless work in children's learning experience. During the three years of my elementary career in a small library community, I have realized that awareness of my work's influence on others should always accompany my pure instincts and personal desires when pursuing any professional career in the wider world. Thus, as a chemical engineer in the future, I not only aspire live up to my passion for chemistry but also to con tribute to relieving the global energy crisis and pollution problems that affect the world's entire living population.