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Nov 6, 2010
Undergraduate / "my mother has made the most profound significance" Texas [4]
Prompt: Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact on your life and explain how and why this person is important to you.
It is difficult to contemplate the amount of impact that all the people in my life so far, considering the fact that I am still prospering from all the profound influences around me, to help shape a more global and prospective achieving individual.
Taking in all aspects from the teachings that have been pressed upon me and utilized towards my future goals; Their has been one prestigious paragon in my life that has imprinted an impression on me, my mother. Carmina Montoya, Born in the city of Eagle Pass, Texas, entered a brutal world of distress and hunger.
Exposed to poverty and with no father figure, my mother was forced to be on a constant move, living with relatives throughout the United States and having to get the enormous hammy downs of clothes, that were four times her size. Thought despite her childhood struggles and being pregnant at such a young age, which had led her to dropping out of high school, my mother has always worked hard to provide what may seem the unachievable at the time; In hope that I would never have to experience the same difficulties that she had once encounter. Being such a prestigious women and a great mother figure, my mother always drilled the notion of going to college and making something out of myself; that nothing is impossible.
As the years passed by and the exposure to the enormous amount of impact that many have had in my life, my mother has made the most profound significance in my life. Through her struggles and hardship she has motivate me to achieve what I desire the most, being the first male in my family to graduate and on my way to attending a four year university, where I can major in International Business, so that I can give back to the poverty-stricken society and what better place to accommodate than University of Texas-- Austin, a place where I can expand my knowledge in a global prospective and contribute back to humanity.
Prompt: Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact on your life and explain how and why this person is important to you.
It is difficult to contemplate the amount of impact that all the people in my life so far, considering the fact that I am still prospering from all the profound influences around me, to help shape a more global and prospective achieving individual.
Taking in all aspects from the teachings that have been pressed upon me and utilized towards my future goals; Their has been one prestigious paragon in my life that has imprinted an impression on me, my mother. Carmina Montoya, Born in the city of Eagle Pass, Texas, entered a brutal world of distress and hunger.
Exposed to poverty and with no father figure, my mother was forced to be on a constant move, living with relatives throughout the United States and having to get the enormous hammy downs of clothes, that were four times her size. Thought despite her childhood struggles and being pregnant at such a young age, which had led her to dropping out of high school, my mother has always worked hard to provide what may seem the unachievable at the time; In hope that I would never have to experience the same difficulties that she had once encounter. Being such a prestigious women and a great mother figure, my mother always drilled the notion of going to college and making something out of myself; that nothing is impossible.
As the years passed by and the exposure to the enormous amount of impact that many have had in my life, my mother has made the most profound significance in my life. Through her struggles and hardship she has motivate me to achieve what I desire the most, being the first male in my family to graduate and on my way to attending a four year university, where I can major in International Business, so that I can give back to the poverty-stricken society and what better place to accommodate than University of Texas-- Austin, a place where I can expand my knowledge in a global prospective and contribute back to humanity.