Writing Feedback / Working women have happier lives. for or against? [4]

Working women's lives continue to receive criticism in many societies and are frequently debated in the national media.In recent decades,the dominant international view has been that working women have definite benefits for themselves and their families.However,especially in Turkey,it is still open to questions.Opinions are divided as to working women have happier lives or not,but it is my firm conviction that working women are happier than other women who do not work.

To begin with,it may be held that children get less care.Working women,so this argument goes,do not have time for their children sufficiently.As a consequence,they are expected to be emotionally disadvantaged in lives,that is because they may not have an interest in their children's problems,they will be unhappy.However, working might actually not lead to unhappiness.Rather,working mothers are an advantage for children since they have economic indepence,so they can meet their children's needs conveniently and children can go to school better.

Housework not done very well,which can be another opposing view.In their assertion,if a woman works,housework is not done regularly.there seems to be some truth in this argument, especially considering fatigue of working many hours.Yet,one significant point is missed,that is,working women help the family budget.Thus.workers can be kept clean as well as new business area will be opened.

Taking everything into consideration, it can be obviously concluded that there is a controversary about subject.Although opponents claim that it has several negative effects for women's lives and their families, it is my contention that working women have always happier lives.Hence,these points which mentioned above should be born in mind and a step towards women's working lives should be taken.

Writing Feedback / Experience of children with divorced parents (proficiency exercise) [NEW]

In many years,there has been a growing problem about children with divorced parents experience more difficulties among families not only in our country but also all around the world.There are wide-range reasons for this issue.In trying to understand and explain why children deprived of family environment withdraw life more trouble,we can focus our attention on two prominant points,namely,divorced parents' psyshological problems, change of environment.

To begin with,it can be seen as one of most crucial factors on subject is divorced parents' psychological problems.On the whole,marriage was considered to be an event which lasts for a life time.However,it is not uncommon to see a person who has got divorced at least once in his or her early age,which affects one's psychology negatively.Hence, this bad psychology may disturb attitude of parents towards their children.Furthermore,exposure to conflict between parents influence their children's psychology that already suffered from parental loss.

When it comes to change of environment,in this respect,it can be said that children begin a different life with the seperation from parents.That is to say,living in a single parent brings about new kinds of environmental challenges.In addition to parents' lack of parenting skills prevents the growth of children in adult properly.All of these motives,children living seperately from their parents may face many difficulties in life.

To sum up,the obvious conclusion to be drawn is that children with divorced parents experience more difficulties is the product of a variety of factors related to divorced parents' psychological problems and change of environment.In my opinion,it should not be forgetten that it is a huge problem and should pay more attention to this problem before it damages children more.

Writing Feedback / proficiency exercise: the advantages and disadvantages of web-based learning [5]

Have you ever thought about sitting at home to attend school?In today's world, developments in communication now make it possible to receive education and training online.A variety of online education and training programs are being used by business, the military, and so on.

It is truism to say that web-based learning is viewed as an appropriate circumstance, yet the downsides of this issue should not be left out.

In the first place, let us mention some of the advantages of web-based learning,which might be very convenient for students who have no limit to time,that is to say, they may access to information anytime whether at home or outside.Besides,students have the opportunity to content update frequent and easy.A further merit of subject is no limit to information storage,which provides the contents of each lecture to pupils who are expected to be educationally advantaged in exams.

On the other hand, too often, there are drawbacks of web-based learning.First of all, owing to no direct contact with the teacher and other students, one requires to get more self-discipline and motivation.Another negative aspect of this case is that no classroom environment obstructs pupils' socialization.

Taking everything into consideration, it can be obviously concluded that web-based learning is open to questions.It has several gains and also costs.Nevertheless,in my contention that the blessing of online education outweigh its shortcomings.Yet, finding the balance between advantages and flaws will cause to an unproblematic education lives for pupils.