Undergraduate / (I am a Korean, born in America) - MY short essay, clearly with an koreanized feeling [5]

I am so impressed with your dream.
and I dont think your essay is with an koreanized feeling.
Maybe on account of I am also Asian.

To love the whole world, I believe we will enjoy our life very well.

Undergraduate / Essay A "My Mean Teacher" [4]

hi,tanisha.

I have experienced the same thing you described in this article.

and u have an indebted heart, I think you will benefit from that.

I always appreciate all of the things happened to me .

we should enjoy our llife. cherish everything and everyone*(including your enemy)

life is so colorful.

I would like to be a friend of you, you can find me in skype---linda.