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Jan 1, 2011
Undergraduate / "if you had 10000$" - UVirginia Essay... engineering supplement [8]
hey guys, the essay title for the engineering supplement essay is
Engineering: If you were given a $10,000 budget and the opportunity to build a small team of talented motivated individuals, what would you propose to accomplish?
Walking everyday from my house to school and back has never been the most sought after time in the day for me. This is mainly because while walking along the streets of Mumbai city, in every block one will come across a slum area, which is greatly polluted and has garbage thrown about in an unhygienic manner, which eventually makes its way through the rest of the block.
Given a budget of 10,000 $, I would make most of my knowledge as a budding engineer to build small garbage disposable robots, which could navigate through all the streets and alleys in my block and a few surrounding blocks, collecting the garbage by storing it in their body. When enough garbage would have been collected, I would further allow these small robots to be able to compress the garbage into a rectangular shape, making it easier for the garbage to be easily transportable.
Knowledge on engineering has always encouraged me to innovate technology at a lower cost providing better and more efficient functions. Robots like this made from used automobile and machine parts can be fairly cost efficient and help in beautifying the whole block and improving the quality of life of many of the slum dwellers.
hey in my opinion i do feel there are a few places where some of the words aren't fitting, but i have no idea how to substitute them!!
Anyways would love some advice and criticism on if what i've written is fine!
hey guys, the essay title for the engineering supplement essay is
Engineering: If you were given a $10,000 budget and the opportunity to build a small team of talented motivated individuals, what would you propose to accomplish?
Walking everyday from my house to school and back has never been the most sought after time in the day for me. This is mainly because while walking along the streets of Mumbai city, in every block one will come across a slum area, which is greatly polluted and has garbage thrown about in an unhygienic manner, which eventually makes its way through the rest of the block.
Given a budget of 10,000 $, I would make most of my knowledge as a budding engineer to build small garbage disposable robots, which could navigate through all the streets and alleys in my block and a few surrounding blocks, collecting the garbage by storing it in their body. When enough garbage would have been collected, I would further allow these small robots to be able to compress the garbage into a rectangular shape, making it easier for the garbage to be easily transportable.
Knowledge on engineering has always encouraged me to innovate technology at a lower cost providing better and more efficient functions. Robots like this made from used automobile and machine parts can be fairly cost efficient and help in beautifying the whole block and improving the quality of life of many of the slum dwellers.
hey in my opinion i do feel there are a few places where some of the words aren't fitting, but i have no idea how to substitute them!!
Anyways would love some advice and criticism on if what i've written is fine!