machinairum
Jan 29, 2011
Writing Feedback / IELTS-computers..use,future prospects and over-dependence. [5]
I think the correct form should be "human life"
I think the correct form should be "human life"
machinairum
Jan 29, 2011
Grammar, Usage / 'A FAIRLY BRIGHT STUDENT' is this expression correct? [3]
I think that's correct. But I don't quite understand why do you have to say directly that you are bright?
I think that's correct. But I don't quite understand why do you have to say directly that you are bright?
machinairum
Jan 30, 2011
Grammar, Usage / Lacking a verb? Is this sentence correct? [5]
I saw this on wikipedia
The primary function of the heart is to circulate the blood, and through the blood, oxygen and vital minerals to the tissues and organs that comprise the body.
And I think it lacks a verb
and through the blood, oxygen and vital minerals to the tissues and organs that comprise the body.
I saw this on wikipedia
The primary function of the heart is to circulate the blood, and through the blood, oxygen and vital minerals to the tissues and organs that comprise the body.
And I think it lacks a verb
and through the blood, oxygen and vital minerals to the tissues and organs that comprise the body.
machinairum
Mar 14, 2011
Writing Feedback / "increase interest" - Teachers should encourage their students to question everything [2]
I've just tried to improve your first paragraph. Hope it's all good and correct.
I think the last sentence isn't good. Your ideas are not clear. You should improve this "choose correct teaching techniques and correct teacher's mistakes", make it a complete sentence with a compete idea.
I've just tried to improve your first paragraph. Hope it's all good and correct.
Nowadays education is a crucial part in people lifeour life . People are taking more education than previous. It is an important to checkexamineteacher's methods instructional methods of a teacher to ensure moderneducation'seducational quality and understandabilityof students . Every teacher has different teaching techniques. Some teachers allows students to ask questions until they are satisfied with the information answers. In my opinion, teachers should encourage their students to question everything. My reasons to believe this statement The reason I believe this is because it ensureincreases students' understandability comprehensibility and their interests in the subject which teacher are teaching , choose correct teaching techniques and correct teacher's mistakes.
I think the last sentence isn't good. Your ideas are not clear. You should improve this "choose correct teaching techniques and correct teacher's mistakes", make it a complete sentence with a compete idea.
