Writing Feedback / Students to study alone or with a group? Which do you prefer? Reasons? [3]

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?

In general, everyone has way to successes in life. Some students like to work with group. I prefer to study individually because it helps me to improve my skills and helps me to focus more.

First of all, studying alone helps me to build my skills. For example, answering our homework alone gives me to be more responsible. Also, it motivates me to be more accurate in my work in future. For instance, studying alone helps me to finish my assignments on time. Also, it improves my ability in the future.

Second, studying alone helps me to concentrate more in our lessons. For instance, I can prepare my schedules, exercises and guidelines. Moreover, we have a lot of subjects which require us to study and sit alone such as reading and math. In my opinion, I can take advantage of every minute without wasting by studying alone.

In conclusion, I prefer to study individually because it helps me to improve my skills and helps me to focus more.

Writing Feedback / Eating @ Home or in Restaurants?HOME food comes with freedom, low cost & high quality [3]

Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer?

In general eating always is very important in our life. There are some people who prefer to eating at food stands or restaurant, however other people who prefer to prepare and eating food at home. Bothe options have their advantages and disadvantages. I prefer to eat food at home for three reasons: freedom, save money, and quality.

First of all, the difference between eating at home and eating at restaurant is freedom. I can enjoy when I eat at home. For example, I can watch TV and I can put any channel I want; moreover, I can play video game or call my friends. However, I can smoke when I eat at home. On other hand, when I eat at restaurant, I have to obey rules. I can wear anything I need when I eat at home; also, I can eat at kitchen or on bedroom.

Second, the difference between eating at home and eating at restaurant is save money. Eating at home always is one of the best ways to save money. For instance, I can buy food for all my family in whole week; also, when I have a party at my home, I can cook food for everyone there. On the other hand, when I bring food from restaurant, it is expensive for me. Eating at restaurant is more expensive than eating at home.

Third, the difference between eating at home and eating at restaurant is quality. Home is always clean and healthy. For example, I can cook any food I want without oil; as well, I can put any taste I need sweet or spicy. On other hand, eating at restaurant is not healthy because they put more oil in food; still, I'll be overweight.

In conclusion, I prefer to eat at prepare and eating food at home because freedom, save money, and quality.

Writing Feedback / Essay : study at home by using technology in the future? [3]

In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer?

In this essay I want to discuss the difference between studying at home by using technology and at traditional schools. There are some students who prefer to use technology at home when they study. I prefer to study at home by using technology for three reasons: comfort, speed, and better meaning.

First, difference between study technology and traditional schools is comfortable. When I study, I can use my computer to find anything I want. For example, if my teacher gave me assignments, I can do it by computer. Also, if I have homework, I can type it to make it become clear when my teacher reads it. However the traditional schools are uncomfortable to do any assignments and not clear when I did the homework by hand.

Second, difference between study technology and traditional schools is speed. I can do my assignments a short time. For instance, I can do three assignments in one hour when I use the technology. On another hand, when I use the traditional way, I want three or four hours to do my assignments.

Third, difference between technology class and traditional schools is finding better meaning. When I have some words I need some words that have unfamiliar meaning, I can find several meanings by internet, but traditional way is just to guess the meaning and maybe it is wrong. Also, I can prove my language to find academic word to replace my old word.

In conclusion, I prefer to study at home by using technology because comfortable, speed and find better meaning. The technology coming to make a life easy.

Writing Feedback / Live in a big city (more chances, transportation, jobs) [2]

prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a large city, which you prefer?

In general, some people prefer living in a small town while others prefer the big cities. Both have their own advantages and disadvantages. I grew up in a big city. I prefer to live in the big city because there are advantages in live in a big city such as chance to find transportation, chance to find a job, and higher quality of education.

First, the advantage in live in a big city is transportation. Live in a big city has more chance to find a more transportation such as bus, car and train. For example, when I decided to go my school I used several transports such as bus or taxi. Also, the transportations are very comfortable in large city because you can go to any places really quickly, and you save money riding on buses and subways etc. Especially, these are days oil prices are soaring high so it will be very helpful for you to save money.

Secondly, the advantage in live in a big city is chance to find a job. I think the live in a big city has more chance to find a job. For example, when was young I graduated from a university, I find a job in a big city because there are a lot of companies in a big city. In the other hand, many people were moved from small town to big city to find a good job.

Lastly, the advantage in live in a big city is more chances for high quality of education. There are various resources and information readily available in the big city. The residents there can easily acquire books, shows and movies in different fields. On the other hand, those resources might be difficult to obtain for inhabitants in the country.

In conclusion, I prefer to I prefer to live in the big city because there are advantages in live in a big city such as chance to find transportation, chance to find a job, and higher quality of education.

Writing Feedback / 'Computer in the future has no limits' - What will Happen in the Future [2]

Please Help me....

What will Happen in the Future

Amid all this technological development that we are witnessing today, what can you expect to happen in the future?
I saw a wonderful video on YouTube in our class "UNIV 112", explain the new invention for a American student. The invention is a small device attached around the neck in a series and online wireless with mobile. This device is provide with a small camera and small project. The profit of this device is that the device capture the image of anything front of you and immediately related to the Internet and looking for information on what has been captured then provide to you immediately and displays the result by a small projector front of you. Something wonderful and amazing, we are now in 2011 and have reached to all this development and has become an almost daily, so what can happen after 100 years.

Computer in the future has no limits, they see a light weight you can carry wherever you go, has a screen of the liquid crystal shows all the information required, and can run this computer with the left hand or right hand, and will be programmed by the human voice, and would also request information by voice, and this computer is characterized by high ability to store huge number of information and retrieval in a jiffy, because of the use of sophisticated electronic chips. Housing in the future will be floating on the water in the middle of the ocean, and have the power plants and fuel for such housing, and will be the glass is the basic material for the construction of housing in the future, even allowed to enter the largest amount of the sun to take advantage of the energy.

I sat thinking in the future and how it can be a life after 100 years. I imagined the car flying in the air and traffic lights above the skyscrapers and the policeman wearing a fly shoes. I imagined the children go to school by school bus flying and they learn how to program the robot to any function of it Required. I imagined the shops have changed and everything has become automatic. Clothing stores do not have clothes, but they have large screens showing all the clothes in the store, you only need to touch anything you like. I imagined the grocery store has a robot can encapsulates everything automatically and bake a bread in a few seconds and clean the place with amazing speed. Also, I imagined that travel between countries more easily by airplanes like a space ships instead of the airplanes. When we get the plane we find our self after 5 minutes in Saudi Arabia or Europe or in the United States. You may also visit the whole world in half an hour. I imagined the future houses, which working automatically. Coffee is prepared by the robot and the TV is a small device picks up all channels and displays them on the wall like cinema.

I imagined that the world is after all this development could easily be back to nothing, and that begins with the new. I realized that if we cannot control this enormous development and did not use it properly can be the cause of our destruction.