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a_safaei_m   
May 25, 2011
Writing Feedback / some people believe that sport have no place in school curriculum [4]

some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum, how far do you agree or disagree??

Yet some people put forward the view that competitive sports, both teamwork and individual have no place in school curriculum, however, from my point of view, this is impossible to argue against the fact that physical games and sports play a significant role in pupils growth and maturity.

Playing competitive sports in schools can have different advantages in children's development. For instance, it improves their social and emotional behavior. By playing teamwork sports children coordinate, which teach them to be responsible to their friends. Furthermore, in game they will relate together and manage their conflicts and also establish some friendships which will endure for long time.

Almost all competitive sports, both teamwork and individual, consist of some tactics which children should quickly, sometimes in less than 1 second, decide how to use them. This will activate their minds and improves their intellectual ability which is useful in all aspects of their life. Therefore it is fair if we attach importance to playing sport in school curriculum.

There is no doubt that people would be healthier by playing sport. In addition it is clear to everyone that playing in school with their peer is more likeable for children. Therefore we should encourage children and make them interested to sports and place sports in their school curriculum.

In conclusion, it can be very useful if we devote time to playing sports and teaching it in schools. In addition we should put energy into it as well as other lessons such as mathematics and geology to make children interested.
a_safaei_m   
May 25, 2011
Writing Feedback / 'High costs' - IELTS International sporting occasions [3]

hello my friend
your writing in really good and i think you have covered the topic completely. but I have heard that it is not good to say a personal and scientific reason together."from a personal and psychological perspective." but overall your writing really helped me, i hope i can write like this some day.
a_safaei_m   
May 25, 2011
Research Papers / Should Hindi (the language) be compulsory? [4]

hi my friend
i live in Iran and believe me it is like your country, there are several kinds of accents here but i dont believe it should be compulsory for everyone to learn FARSI,although in my opinion their profit lies in learning FARSI, to have the opportunity to work an merchandise with their compatriots .
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