Graduate / "Practicing medicine is a special privilege" - Medical Personal statement [7]

Hi, I need help with this one too. Thanks, what does it mean to write a 2 lined 80 character essay. this one is on the Major. Need advice on it oo. I'm applying for colleges. Senior Year.

I chose this major because I don't like to see people suffering and I want to make a difference. The illnesses and deaths in my family have also inspired me to want to help people because I can understand where they are coming from and I can see the pain that they endure. I want to become the doctor that people come to for help and trust in to help them recover and get well.

Graduate / "Practicing medicine is a special privilege" - Medical Personal statement [7]

okay, I think it means...

These are the lines.
1. type 80 characters
2. type 80 characters

Please advise.

Thanks

Graduate / "Practicing medicine is a special privilege" - Medical Personal statement [7]

Thank you,

I actually adjusted it to be just what it was asking for. 2 line 80 characters.

My desire is to explore the field of medicine and make a difference in peoples lives.
I care that people suffer from illnesses; my ambition is to help, treat and cure humans.

Essays / Special circumstances that affect your family's ability to fund your college expenses [7]

This is what I came up with...

Any thoughts? That question isn't suppose to be said is it?...just the truth right...

My parents are currently employed; they are supporting my brother and other siblings that are in school. They are currently pay check to pay check, and cannot fund my college expenses.

My goal is to apply for financial aid, hold a part-time job when needed, and apply for as many scholarships as I can. I realize that college is a big expense, especially for the time that I will be spending toward my degree as becoming a Doctor. My parents support will not be void; they will support me as much as they can.

Essays / Special circumstances that affect your family's ability to fund your college expenses [7]

Hi,

Thank you, I actually think thats a good idea, they can see that parents are just ordinary workers...

:-)