Writing Feedback / [graph] 'the number of international students in the USA' [2]

The charts show the number of international students in the USA by subject and country.
Summarise th information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Now write a report. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts was attached.

The first graphic gives the quantity of abroad student in the USA between 2000 and 2004 years. Second chart show the number of student diving them by subject.

2000 the most students came from China but in 2004 China gave this position to India. In 2000 number of students came from India was 40 000 line jump to 79000. Negative position between these years show Japan, Taiwan, Indonesia .Students from Turkey, Mexico and Canada increase a little.

On the line chart we can noticeable see that the most of international students study in "business and management " .There is a little different changes from 2000 to 2004 in a number of student who choose business and management. In engineering line shows decrease to 2004. There is growing the number of students who studying in social science. The least chosen subject was life center and this position stays the same for 4 years. Mathematic and computing in 2002 year shows rising trend but to 2004 declines.

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Writing Feedback / too much fat, salt and sugar; Weight of people is increasing, health decreasing [3]

Please check my essay and give Band for IELTS writing part 2

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are deceasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures should be taken to solve them?

Today the problem of overweight is very real largely in many countries. Every year a lot of people die from heart disease and diabetes.
In my opinion, one of the reasons this is fast foods or pre-prepared meals. These foods often contain too much fat, salt and sugar. Fast foods are cheap to buy and very easy to prepare. Student and other young people usually eat these meals. In my view teachers should give information about health hazard of these products. For example my cousin has not drunk soft drinks till hus teacher told him about their damage to our health.

The twenty first century is the period of new technologies. These help us in our job, study, life and now we are less active than before we were. There are many internet shops where we can order everything from home.

The third reason of declining health is that children spend much time on playing video games, watching television however fifteen years before we usually played football, basketball and spent much time in outside. There are many exercises classes have to be for children active life in school.

Other problem which has big influence to our health is genetically modified organism(GMO). There a lot of products in which growing were use GMO. Government should control the composition GMO in products. For instance in some Europe countries producing, importing goods with GMO are illegal.

In conclusion, if we want to be healthy, we have to eat nutritious food, take diet, do every day exercise and do not allow children to spend much time playing video games.