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Oct 4, 2011
Book Reports / Why is Justine important for plot development in Frankenstein? [2]

Why is Justine important for plot development in Frankenstein?
A few things:
- I'm having some trouble deciding wether or not my intro paragraph is strong. Any comments would be great.
- I would also like to know if my supporting arguments make sense. I'm hoping that they are not too vague or all over the place.

The concept of human nature is unique and different human experiences drive humans to do dreadful things. In Mary Shelly's Frankenstein, her goal was to bring some ideas concerning the weakness of humanity into light: Frankenstein and the Creature illustrate our inner evils. Justine is important for plot development because her circumstances show that the Creature is a reflection of the dark side of Frankenstein's consciousness, revealing that the both characters are monsters.

It is rather ironic that Frankenstein, being a human being, showed almost inhumane characteristics. When Justine was wrongfully convicted for William Frankenstein's murder, Frankenstein made an interesting transition from being self-centered to self-loathing. "Justine died; she rested; I was alive. The blood flowed freely through my veins, but a weight of despair and remorse pressed on my heart, which nothing could remove it" ( ). In spite of his feelings of grief, he did not end up confessing that he knew his brother's murderer. This questions whether or not he felt guilty for the right reasons. He may have ran away because of the guilt he felt in creating such a monster - the guilt of making humanity's instincts manifest. It may also have been because he was too concerned about being seen in a negative light that he let Justine die for a crime that she did not commit. Frankenstein perfectly illustrates the human flaw of selfishness.

For a majority of the novel, Victor escapes from taking ethical responsibility. "I felt as if I had committed some great crime, the consciousness of which haunted me. I was guiltless, but I had indeed drawn a horrible curse upon my head, as mortal as that of crime" ( 167). He is unable to take full blame for Justine's death. This may make it difficult for readers to sympathize with this character as he does not want accept the blame for his actions.

Frankenstein creates this creature that is originally filled with the honorable human characteristics: the instinct to love and to be kind. Similar to a newborn child, it gained knowledge from its experiences from the world around it. "I was benevolent; my soul glowed with love and humanity; but am I not alone, miserably alone? You, my creator, abhor me..." ( 103 ). Because its creator or "father" abandoned it, it soon began to experience feelings of anger and hatred towards the world. Once the creature learned that humans would always treat him terribly, it replicated the immoral behaviour of its creator. Specifically, the monster chose to frame a woman that had never mistreated him.

Frankenstein stole the ability to create a human being from God. Forming a comparison between God and Victor, it says, "I remembered Adam's supplication to his Creator. But where was mine? He had abandoned me, and in the bitterness of my heart I cursed him" ( 134). The Creature was mistreated but, on the other hand, the Creature was devious enough to murder William and frame Justine for it. Like Frankenstein, the Creature brings about the issue of whether or not the Creature deserves sympathy. The creature asks its Creator to make a mate for him and promises to runaway. "...one as deformed and as horrible as myself would not deny herself to me. My companion must be of the same species, and have the same defects. This being you must create" ( 146). It is almost a form of manipulation as the Creature essentially professes its benevolence and longing to be accepted by humans and yet, kills innocent people. Frankenstein creates this monster that in a way, emulates the negative parts of his character.

Even without life, Justine's serves an importance to the further development of the plot. With the intention of using Justine's body, Frankenstein changes his mind about creating a mate for the Creature. "Shall I create another like yourself, whose joint wickedness might desolate the world ... I will never consent" ( ) . Frankenstein continues to treat the Creature in an undignified way, serving as a driving force for the Creature's outrage.

Although Justine is a minor character, her connection to the two characters reveals that they are both flawed. All the Creature's vices stem directly from being abandoned by its creator. Frankenstein's greatest weakness is that he declined the responsibilities that came with the act of creation. Justine is a powerful character as she played a crucial role in the progression of immorality in the two characters. It leaves us wondering who the true hero in the novel is.
lboogie   
Oct 4, 2011
Book Reports / Of Mice and Men------George Milton - Character analysis essay [2]

George Milton from John... (no need for a comma)

physicaLLY strong MAN during...

They travel together TO reach...

man that has disabled with living life and reaches their dream -- do you mean a man that has been living life disabled and reach their dream?

Remember to cite any quotes from the book
lboogie   
Mar 1, 2012
Undergraduate / 'This university doesn't have the business major' - transfer ESSAY [3]

the sentence beginning with "my father, a person.." is a run-on sentence. Try to break it into two sentences

"Now, now as a University..." -- used the word twice

"Being on my own for a year has thrust my.." change "thrust" to "thrusted"

"I know that transferring to a fine institution as your's can" - change your's to YOURS (not apostrophe)

Although the university I am currently enrolled in is a fine institution in itself, it doesn't have the business major i wish to receive which is a B.A. in English.

change untimely to "ultimately"
lboogie   
Mar 1, 2012
Book Reports / "Corporate Media.." and "How Corporate Concentration.." - thesis statement [2]

The texts "Corporate Media and the Threat to Democracy " by Robert McChesney and "How Corporate Concentration Changed a Television Room" by James McLean argue that the media must represent diverse views and opinions for a functional democracy to exist. The democratic role of the media is to recognize important issues and to allow its consumers to form their own opinions about these issues. A small number of corporate interests control most of what the media produces, which influences what is expressed and how it is communicated to the public. I argue that media concentration is a threat to democracy because it interferes with the publics right to learn about its society. The media feeds the public information that is believed to be true, but in reality, these corporate powers restrict the variety of information that is being conveyed to the public.
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