Writing Feedback / "women are solely responsible for bringing children up"; I completely disagree [3]

Topic:Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. do u agree or not?

Essay:
I believe father and mother together make a lovely life for child, it means presence of both of them
Is necessary .actually each of parents provide a different world for child, father with leader characters like: final decider, commander, and as a person who contact with troubles, out of home always knows as hero at mind of child.

Mother with affable personage act as manager in home and always known as sacrificial and gracious person in child's life.
Optimize lifestyle for child depict in providing a pleasant environment at home and good relation between parent and financial support in professional level.
However , nowadays machinery 's life decompose family , for business problems in many
times father and mother have to live separately for long time just for earning money or satisfying Employer.
In many cases father have to work out and leave home for long time. This distance make some deficits in educating and training children and it's too hard for mother to compensate father's absence

I completely disagree with this idea, "women are solely responsible for bringing children up" .
For two reasons:
First, personality of child in age infancy grows up when father and mother affect on it together.
For example when a child fall into a trouble and for resolve it needs to father's attendance ,father has been being and it wouldn't ask it from mother or any persons, because father has a distinct personality and give a distinct method of contacting that nobodies can offer it and also it's correct for mother too.

Second , mother never can 't behave exactly like father because a woman has different view than a man.

Writing Feedback / Essay on "Prevention is better than Cure." [2]

That subject has a long history and nowadays, all persons who work as medical man choose prevention ways and suggest it to others.

If we've look in narrow view to medical treatment history we found ,how many people lost their life just for unknowing a simple thing on infections and ways of affliction.

for example a specimen of fever which called milk fever is infected from milk to body and make an agitation in digestion and nervous and defensive systems in the body,it can doesn't occur if we just boiled milk.

In fact,Cure has divided in two categories,known cure treatment is belonged to the first category and second group is about the treatments is under discover processing treatment.but prevention ways is known for all of them and for avoiding afflicted with a disease we need to know just some aware which can get it from different ways like broadcasting,internet or directly from physicians.

I believe government play an important role in ascending prevention culture,they can done it by investigating in medical centers for different purposes like making training course for persons who relevant to the sickness or sending trainer to far land or border area.Give budget for developing in medical research and encourage people who work in this part.

Many countries have many people believe in traditional treatment instead of scientifically,
in many cases neither of them doesn't has scientific basis, but it has been originating from our descendant's knowledge, it mean they have test and check it on many people and their outcome can be use by medical doctor to examine and find new solutions on avoidance way or treatment.for an species it was fame from the past, it shouldn't ate melon with honey because it made disorder in digestion system.

Writing Feedback / Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure. [2]

I believe capital punishment is heavy punishment and should have been done under very excessive crimes like murder or killing in big dimensions(massacre),when there is no expectation for saving a murder.

All of us know when a person born he is not a murder and don't want to kill or violate or rape to any body.but before any judging about a criminal first we should see what is his backgrounds and his reactions has roots in what kind of troubles.

Different research shows many criminals had family's trouble in their life and
in many times their parents didn't had a warm relation they were divorce's children and they have lots of deficits in their childhoods continuing in life without any aspiration caused they didn't follow any reasonable aims in their life and have done every things that compensate their deficits.

Basically death penalty doesn't avoid increasing violence ,when a person perpetrate a crime ,statistically, in many times know about his retribution of his crime,but the question is, why he or she have done it again?