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Posts by sniper_moon
Joined: Dec 3, 2011
Last Post: Dec 13, 2011
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sniper_moon   
Dec 3, 2011
Writing Feedback / What is considered as a "bad behavior" in Morocco? [NEW]

HEY ! recently, i have written some essays and poems but i didn't find anyone correct me my mistakes . if you pleased, anyone can help me ! i have this essay , and it needs to be corrected . " what is considered as a "bad behavior" in Morocco.

Culture is an extremely broad concept to be defined. Culture is constructed of all of the ideas, behaviours, beliefs, and outcomes widespread to , and expounding, a group's way of life. Culture covers all products of human being's interaction. Every culture is composed of two component: material culture that includes every touchable product made up due to human interaction , this includes books, art, inventions, foods, clothing and so on. While non-material consists of intangible productions of human interaction such as : ideas, beliefs, values, language, and social institutions.

Attempting to understand culture in an appropriate way, we will focus on the aspect of cultures, specially, the non-material culture- values, norms, symbols. And trying to understand how these aspects have been passing down from generation to another in order to grasp why culture is important in person's day-to-day life.

In my normal day-to-day activities. as soon as I get up, I go ahead to wash my face, then, as a Muslim, I pray "Sub'h". I have my breakfast but before eating my meal, I have to utter "in the name of Allah". When I finish my breakfast , I leave the house and go so as to wait with other people in the platform in order to get the bus to university. Of course, I have to pay for the bus, or I will be fined if I didn't pay my ticket. I am obliged to be in my class on time; otherwise, the professor will shut me out. Paying attention is required in class because my professors become bigot in this case. If we look closely into our day-to-day life, we will fathom that there are set of practices are carried out according our norms, values and beliefs.

First, I would mention to that this culture, Moroccan culture, is not distinguished from other cultures. Depending on values, beliefs and norms every culture draws the line between what is "normal"- good behavior, and what is "deviance"- bad behavior. Values delineate how individual should behave toward himself as well as toward others ; so as not to generalize , what is set as values for a group , it can be rejected by others, thus we can find a kind of diversity. No one denies that we, as Moroccan Muslims , mostly, act according to our religion but, actually, there was mismatch between ideal Moroccan culture that depends only on religion, in which holds high ethics that the Muslim has to practice in his daily life such as : generosity, abstinence, respect, mutual assistance and so on, and real Moroccan culture that is practiced in our day-to-day life. A culture which is teemed with other traditions and rites that its sources are unknown and ambiguous. if we talk about these norms and values, are actually practiced and expanded in this culture, are different from what it is proclaimed ; for instance , when a man gets married in the first morning he has to prove that his wife was virgin through showing her blood to everyone as a sign of dignity, and for him as virility ; or when "women" go to shrine to plead for a "need". This traditions have nothing to do with Islam, yet they has been spread in our community. These Folkways are passed down from previous generations, fortunately , these weak norms are disappearing , because young people , new generations, see it as an insult an humiliation to the female . Norms moreover are derived from values. Thus also we need them to maintain stability of our social life. Both they draw line between what is prohibited and what is allowed. It show us what should do ( wash my face in the morning , be at time in class, pay for the tickets , respect my professors...) , it also tell us what we should not do (laughing out loud in class, insult elder persons , run the red lights).

Culture determines the way we follow the world around us, as human. It touches how we think . How we respect and value. The institutions we establish. The rites we hold. The laws we legislate. How we worship. What we eat. What we wear , and what we think of as beautiful or ugly. But this culture is conducted by values, norms and beliefs that save our rights: "Your right to swing your arms ends just where the other man's nose begins"
sniper_moon   
Dec 8, 2011
Writing Feedback / Should people always follow fashion? [3]

i can't agree more about the content of this essay , i firmly believe that following fashion is only a wast of money and our identity. when we try to follow the fashion, implicitly, we follow other cultures .
sniper_moon   
Dec 8, 2011
Writing Feedback / Do you believe that experimentation on animals for scientific purposes is justified [3]

EF_Susan
first ! Nowadays, mostly animals are used for testing cosmetic products. >>> here, i think ! Nowadays , mostly animals have been used for testing cosmetic products.

second! i have read in some books that using subjectivity( I, you, He..) in the essay is not useful ! would you mind if you help me with this !
sniper_moon   
Dec 8, 2011
Poetry / Sable blood, by Me [3]

I need your comments and your help , by the way, this is my 3rd poem !

At the dusk , discerned to me a shadow
Coming from the gray easter twilight
Jostling through the fog
Walking soothingly with no row
Upright as white knight
fighting for Angus Og
Owns no sword,shield,nor bow
Owns only a wax light
Whispering to that fog
When does the darkness turn to light ? .
...Fight
...Fight
...Fight

Yet, it's never changed the night

The wet breeze osculates a callow ,
Impeccable, pure, sinless, white;
Dallies his feelings and let them outgrow
With confidence with no contrite
He matched her with snow ,
Yet he'd never known!
At the noon,the murk dissipated
My true-hearted put bane in my ade
Participated
As a snake snakes and lurks with
Unanticipated
Glance to coerce me or make me frayed !
With the snake's bite, I was mazed
I, as a tree, surrounded by wind, swayed
I thought in the deep I could wade
I've never thought you're jade
if only I had had a blade
If only I had had a spade
To kill, inhume and make burial parade
Because I loved, I made .

Yes he'd never known

The beloved osculates a callow;

And inscribes a flesh-wound from cheek to brow
Vows him in other site ;
There is more, morrow !
From the twelfth night to the last night
She'll ignite...
every glade mallow

and I'm here
With my tear

Struggling that poison
Experiencing treason

And, all what I possess,
to stop living in darkness

since the light lifted the veil that clings about the shadow's noblesse.
sniper_moon   
Dec 13, 2011
Poetry / Sable blood, by Me [3]

First, i would like to think you for your beautiful words.

My true-hearted put bane in my aid >> has another meaning!

inhume means bury !
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