Writing Feedback / city workers decide to live in the country. problem is with their transport system [4]

hi mr.Botirov,how are you?I think your question isnt clear for readers.please reform it!

Writing Feedback / Should students learn music and art in secondary school ? [4]

I strongly agree with the statement that Should students learn music and art in secondary school,because at that age they need to upbringing their minds.

Undergraduate / 'future is the main issue' - stanford ... what matters to u & y ? [19]

hi,how are you?
you write with out any introduction,body,conclusion
and no one wants to read this type of writing.
I hope you would change your methods of writing.
good luck