Undergraduate / 'I have the whole world' - Union College [2]

you can add that Union has a unique system for a liberal arts college - one major, which is ur intrest, some compulsory subjects, and electives - these are optional and can be doctored to your intrests. visit this link for more - union.edu/academic/academic-program/index.php

the reason i am saying this is because you can add some of this info into your last 2 lines to make it more personalized in regards to union maybe...as for grammar/summarizing the last commenter has aided you adequately i believe. you have already tackled the question creatively. i think you are gonna get in - im applying myself and cant say the same for myself sadly

Undergraduate / 'An anything but ordinary college' - Oberlin College Supplement Help [3]


i spent my every moment doesnt work. make it "i spent every moment i could" or "i spent all the time i could"


here after the oberlin, i think its better to make it - " but despite all my investigations, I remained hungry for more." and then finally change the wanted to want and make it "i want to be an Obie."

I know this is late, but its on time if you are applying RD and you have not given any indication so i thought i could help.

Undergraduate / 'Nepal's realities' - admission in mph Global health (international health) [3]

dai le yo kata apply garna ko lagi garnu bhako ho>??

did you do ur mmbs in china?