jp4ever
Dec 31, 2011
Undergraduate / "Sadness"- Yale supplement [9]
I love this! If I were an admission officer I would admit you right away. The only thing is that I don't know if Yale will like your writing style. It's not very formal and I've seen many other students do this, too. So can you make your essay more in-depth and insightful? Like why do you want to expand your knowledge and all that? What's the purpose?
I love this! If I were an admission officer I would admit you right away. The only thing is that I don't know if Yale will like your writing style. It's not very formal and I've seen many other students do this, too. So can you make your essay more in-depth and insightful? Like why do you want to expand your knowledge and all that? What's the purpose?