Undergraduate / 'an incentive to sprint outdoors' - risk, achievement [4]

i think its missing a part right?

Undergraduate / 'courses offered at Stony are really challenging' - Why Stony Brook? [4]

you repeat twice that you like who close Stony is to NYC!!

Undergraduate / The Aftermath of Rape And What I've Learned. Personal Statement! [4]

This essay really caught my attention if you could just elaborate not only more on what happened to the girl but also how it impacted you it would be perfect :)