Essays / Need help on starting an essay on injustice (+posted essay) [9]

Injustice mainly means to act unfair and violation of the rights of others.
because u use unfair which is an adjective ,and use and after that so you should use an adjective form of violation:violent

Student Talk / How to enhance my English? [52]

hi sonusamuel, to be honest I have the same problem.what kind of books have you study so far?

Student Talk / How to enhance my English? [52]

thanks alot my dear friends :)

Scholarship / Scholarship Introduction: Right to the point or an anecdote? [6]

it was good but as athena said it's better to add something extra.for example you can start from your childhood dreams or you can start by mentioning your short & also long ter goal then your experiences and actions that you have done to fullfill them

good luck :)

Writing Feedback / 'Medical, nursing, and health care system in Iran' - THIS JOURNAL [4]

1)If people have mental and physical health, they are able to help their country to improve in many aspects:you use first conditional with if....so you should write in this way:If people have mental and physical health, they will be able to help their country to improve in many aspects.

2)the more developed the country is ,the better medical care it has.
3)most of the governments try to increase qualities and quantities of health system in their countries
4)The last but not least one is the quantities:without the before least
5) not only do all of these conditions cause people not to travel to other countries for medical treatment but also there are lots of foreign patients:because you use cause in present way you should use present form of verb (do)before your main verb as the instructure

good luck :)