paul1911
Feb 3, 2012
Writing Feedback / Art of writing, playing music; every have the right to choose any kind of music [6]
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard every nowadays?
Music is an instrumental sound combined in a pleasing way. It is an art of writing or playing music. There are around hundreds of countries around the world today and all of them having a different traditional music.
I believe, music is very important in our life. It makes you feel relax, good and sometimes makes you cry, emotional or takes you in the world of imagination. There are different types of music are available in this world today made by a rhythmic sound and melodies. One have a chance to choose any kind of music which suits their needs. No matter in whatever mood you are. Today in the world of developing technologies artist all over the world had put their all efforts in producing a world class music for every emotional state for every person.
No one knows, from how many years we are listening to music. From where it has come from? All I can say, without music many people will loose their enthusiasm.
It is believed, traditional music is more important than the international one, and it is being heard every nowadays. I think, todays generation children and adults likes to hear more international music than a traditional one. Whereas, others likes to listen only traditional one. This is because, some people think we should not stop listening to our traditional music, and we should continue to forward our traditional and culture from generation to generation and should not loose it completely.
In my opinion, he likes to listen. Whether it is completely international or traditional and we should not interfere to the one's interest.every person have the right to choose any kind of music
Comments are most welcome. Please also report about my grammatical mistakes, structure. How much you will give? Your opinion about my written essay!!
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard every nowadays?
Music is an instrumental sound combined in a pleasing way. It is an art of writing or playing music. There are around hundreds of countries around the world today and all of them having a different traditional music.
I believe, music is very important in our life. It makes you feel relax, good and sometimes makes you cry, emotional or takes you in the world of imagination. There are different types of music are available in this world today made by a rhythmic sound and melodies. One have a chance to choose any kind of music which suits their needs. No matter in whatever mood you are. Today in the world of developing technologies artist all over the world had put their all efforts in producing a world class music for every emotional state for every person.
No one knows, from how many years we are listening to music. From where it has come from? All I can say, without music many people will loose their enthusiasm.
It is believed, traditional music is more important than the international one, and it is being heard every nowadays. I think, todays generation children and adults likes to hear more international music than a traditional one. Whereas, others likes to listen only traditional one. This is because, some people think we should not stop listening to our traditional music, and we should continue to forward our traditional and culture from generation to generation and should not loose it completely.
In my opinion, he likes to listen. Whether it is completely international or traditional and we should not interfere to the one's interest.every person have the right to choose any kind of music
Comments are most welcome. Please also report about my grammatical mistakes, structure. How much you will give? Your opinion about my written essay!!