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veronicamosquer   
Apr 9, 2012
Writing Feedback / classification of clothing into three categories [3]

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Paragraph of Classification


Clothes: sport, casual, elegant

In modern society, people usually dressed according to the appropriate occasion and purposes to look and feel good. The clothes fall into three different categories: Sport, Casual and Elegant. In the case of sport clothes which are flexible and focused on comfort. These are used to do any exercise or activities to improve health. In addition, sport clothes are used with the purposes of going to the gym or practice any sport. Also, there are many sport clothes for different sports such as basketball, volleyball, and football which use each own fabrics, shoes, and accessories to help prevent injury. On the other hand, the casual clothes are for informal dress code and emphasize relaxation. These are used depending on the occasion or weather. Furthermore, casual clothes are used to go to work or class. Casual clothes can be used to bring seriousness, youthfulness, superiority with combining and wearing different things such as jeans, t-shirts, casual shoes. Finally, elegant clothes are formal dress code and characterized for show off. There are used in social events and formal parties in such. People who are using elegant clothes, such as black and white garments, evening dresses and suits can have an effect in their attitude, culture and status depending on the occasion. Elegant clothes can determine a person's wealth like in the case of celebrities. Clearly, the most popular of all type of clothes is the casual clothing, this is due to its versatility in which you can wear anywhere.
veronicamosquer   
Apr 12, 2012
Writing Feedback / write a paragraph of effects of early marriage. [8]

themselves as well as their chilren.... children
misunderstanding are inevitable. Comsequently, .... Consequently

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veronicamosquer   
Apr 12, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'Types of news: Local, national and international' - news and types essay [5]

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Does entertainment news fit into these? How?
Can local events gain national and international notoriety?
Classification paragraph
Types of news: Local, national and international

In reality people look for news, information about economy, weather, social, politics and crime just to name a few examples. In general, news falls into three different categories: local, national and international. Many people watch local news as part of daily routine. Local news provide a sense of information regarding what happens in your city, county or state which can be useful to any individual who needs up-to-date coverage and events. For example, a recently shooting around your neighborhood can cause major significant around the country. On the other hand, national news is your source for the most breaking news in the whole country you live in. It is the major source for entertainment, sport, health, and political issues. For example, the presidential candidate campaign including analysis and opinion for the economist of the country. Finally, international news is standard for global information. This news will inform and determine what happened around the world. For example, in entertainment a new artist is promoting a new album by touring in different countries. Clearly, local news will be the most watch news in any home due to its up-to-date information in one's local area which tends to be the major concern to any individual.
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