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Paragraph of Classification
Clothes: sport, casual, elegant
In modern society, people usually dressed according to the appropriate occasion and purposes to look and feel good. The clothes fall into three different categories: Sport, Casual and Elegant. In the case of sport clothes which are flexible and focused on comfort. These are used to do any exercise or activities to improve health. In addition, sport clothes are used with the purposes of going to the gym or practice any sport. Also, there are many sport clothes for different sports such as basketball, volleyball, and football which use each own fabrics, shoes, and accessories to help prevent injury. On the other hand, the casual clothes are for informal dress code and emphasize relaxation. These are used depending on the occasion or weather. Furthermore, casual clothes are used to go to work or class. Casual clothes can be used to bring seriousness, youthfulness, superiority with combining and wearing different things such as jeans, t-shirts, casual shoes. Finally, elegant clothes are formal dress code and characterized for show off. There are used in social events and formal parties in such. People who are using elegant clothes, such as black and white garments, evening dresses and suits can have an effect in their attitude, culture and status depending on the occasion. Elegant clothes can determine a person's wealth like in the case of celebrities. Clearly, the most popular of all type of clothes is the casual clothing, this is due to its versatility in which you can wear anywhere.In modern society, people usually dressedaccording to the appropriately to the occasions and purposes to look and feel good.
My sugession;
People of modern society are very much concerned over what would be the appropriate attire for different occasions and purposes.
In general classification , Tt he clothes fall into three different categories: Sport, Casual and Elegant (or Formal?).
In the case ofs Sport clothesgarments(I removed this word as it is used repetitively)which are flexible and focused on comfort and flexibility .These are used to do anyworn by people when they engage in physical exercisesor activitiesto improve health.and therefore they are made to support different hygenic conditions.In addition, sport clothes are used with the purposes of going to the gym or practice any sport.(this sentence sounds repetitive)Also, there are many sport clothes for different sports such asFor Example, sports-wear of different sports such as basketball, volleyballboxing , and footballswimming(have different types of sports in this example)which use each own different fabrics, shoes, and accessories to help prevent injury and improve the sportsman's performance.
On the other hand, the casual clothes are for informal dressescode andthat emphasize relaxation. These are usedPeople wear them depending on the occasion or weather. Furthermore,For example, people wearbeach shorts when they go to the beach in the summer and jackets if the weather turns cold. Also they wear casual are used to go to work or classschool. Casual clothes can be used to bringgive the mood of seriousness, youthfulness, superiority in their different combinationswith combining and wearing different things suchFor example, when a person wearsasDennim jeans with a collar-less T-shirt and a pair of rubber slippers he looks very ordinary and simple. If he wears the same Dennim jeans with a collared T-shirt and casual shoes then he would look much smartert-shirts, casual shoes.
Finally, elegant clothes are formal dressescode and characterized for show offglamour . ThereThey are used inworn at social events and formal parties in such . People who are using elegant clothes, such as black and white garments, evening dresses and suits can have an effect in their attitude, culture and status depending on the occasion.These garments have the ability to clearly demarcate social status of people.Elegant clothes can determine a person's wealth like in the case of celebrities.For example, an evening dress worn by a celebrity cannot be afforded by an ordinary person.ClearlyObviously , the most popular of all type of clothes is the casual clothing, this is due to its versatility in which you can wear anywhere.
you can also say that fasion applies to all three types of garments, but with a very high degree for the formal or elegant dresses. :D
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I know formal is better word than elegant, but it was my professor
