Writing Feedback / Children should be allowed and guided to partake in free time activities [3]

Some people believe that school going children have so much free time. They should spend it by doing it more school work. What do you think??

School going children too are busy in this ultra-modern society. They too need some leisure.

Busy parents in twenty first century are more concerned about performance of their children in examinations. Whenever they return home from work , found kids playing or involved in other activities. As a result, they rebuke the child and force him to study hard. On the other hand, youngsters in their school life are busier with classes, tutorials, demonstrations, project or assignement completions, etc. Consequently they become fed up of this, especially after school hours. They think leisure time activities are only ways through which they can reduce their stress level.

Also, a recent research has proved that the students who induldge themselves with recreational activities; become more capable of scoring good marks in examination as compared to their counterparts. On contrary, children who devote more time to studies and less to or neglect the importance of games and other leisure time activities, become mentally less sharp than others.

If any kid gets extra time , then he should organise it by making schedule. In summer vacations, for an instance, children have too much time to spend,by limiting their time to study and leisure time activities they may be benifitted a lot.

To wind up, children should be allowed and guided to partake in free time activities do that they can cope up effectively with their educational challenges.

Writing Feedback / Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends [NEW]

Popular hobbies and interests change
over time and are more a reflection of
trends and fashions than an indication of
what individuals really want to do in
their spare time. To what extent do you
agree with this statement? Give reasons
for your answer

Time has a definite influence over lifestyle of individuals which, therefore, leads to change iof tastes to them. Such as older generation have different hobbies as compaerd to their younger counterpart.

Advancement of technology with the time has affected the lifestyle of citizens of society to a greater extent. This has directly affected the hobbies and interests also. In the past people had hobbies like collecting stamps and coins, visiting peaceful places, for example. On contrary, these days people are interested in achieving higher scores on online games than their friends. Another example of influence of technological era is collectiion and possesion of electronic and expensive things.

One more reason for this change is incresed globlization and influence of internet on todays brains. They want to become a part of the international culture. So they acquire such hobbies from their peers or media, which make them feel more acceptable and appericiated among their friends and society.

In general, society is not much aware of its interests and is imitating what they see or listen in their atmosphere. Hobbies are important pary of a person's life, so they should be chosen and developed carefully, it can also become a professoon later in life.

Writing Feedback / Museum; see things in reality and feel their texture - it's unforgettable moment [4]

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TOPIC
"Museums for many years have been place of knowledge and cultural exchange. Nowadays, there are more and more resources available on internet so museums will not be needed in the future."

To what extent do you agree or disagree??

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Undoubtedly, internet hqs emerged and is still emerging as an invincible,affordable and easily accessible source of knowledge, however, the value of the museums is still at large and their fate can not be decided right now.

Although internet can provide a vast medium of knowledge at just a click away, but the scenario that one watches and observes with one's eyes is irreplacable. In addition the internet can only provide the pictures, videos and statistics about various sculptures or orher historical prservings, but in a museum we can see them in reality and feel their texture wich is unforgettable moment for the whole life. Moreover , museums are run by various organisations whixh employ and pay their workers. Therefore, some people also visit there to save their employment and to help them financially to preserve the history for next generation.

On the other hand, internet is also advantageous in some aspects. For instance, it supplies information to one who can not reach the museum located in different province or nation, or he can not afford or has shortage of time due to busy schedule.

In conclusion, both of these sources of knowledge play their own roles, and no one can conquer on other altogether.

Writing Feedback / Successful sports professionals - international reputation of the nation role [3]

Topic
Successful sports professionals earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think its fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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World of sports is a million dollar industry. Players of various games like soccer and cricket are highly payed and they earn immense name and fame while compared with doctors, engineers and defense personells. Two different opinions about this fact will be discussed in following paragraphs before a final conclusion is made.

On the one hand people believe that figures in various fields are people who earn reputation for their home nation in the field of sports, so they deserve the high rewards. Added to this, various sports teams have ti commonly visit to tournaments which are being organised away from their motherland,so they are often away from theie friends and families. Their,this sacrifice, often builds and strengthens the international affairs. Therefore in these terms their higher income level is fully justified.

On the other hand, some people feel that other important professionals like medical professionals, army recruits, police officers,etc. are unfairly less paid. Although, these occupations have harder duties and they serve country and humanity day and night. So, they deserve more respect and reputation in the society as compared to sports or film superstars.

Finally, in my perspect though sports stars play a big role in building an international reputation of the nation, but other professionals also play a role to serve the motherland and its natives, so the pay scale should be equal for all of these.