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sevil   
Feb 4, 2014
Writing Feedback / Has ease of cooking improved life? [7]

Food has always been the most important survival factor for human to save and continue his/her existence. Preparing food was not as easy as we do today. Nowadays developing technologies like microwave and electrical ovens simplify our life very much. Besides, our way of looking to providing food is changed largely. We spent our time for other activities like career, education, traveling, doing sport. Unfortunately, this affair brings some disadvantages. The processed materials are not very healthy and will cause health problems like cancer, obese. I think ease of making food has good effect on the human's life because of these supporting reasons.

First of all, in the past preparation of food by hunting was demanding and hard action. Cooking food was a time consuming job. Then by developing civilization and technologies especially food industrial technology life becomes easier. Although electrical ovens and microwaves make providing food easier and faster but we live in fast world too. Daily activities leave little time to cooking then cleaning the kitchen and utensils. We can spend our time for other interests like career, education, traveling and sport instead.

Second one, because of developing technologies we can buy various foods, fresh fruits, vegetables even exotic fruits and eating materials which are imported from other countries. For example in hyper markets you can see more than 100 kind of bread or cheese. Besides, because of the refrigerators we can save foods for more time and later uses so you do not need to go shopping every day. But it is a fact, these frizzed or canned materials are not nutritive and wholesome so can cause health problematic like obese and high blood pressure because of additional salt, sugar or oil.

The last one, as a result of developing the quality of life is intensified. We have more choices for eating and can taste different kind of foods by making or eating in different restaurants. French, Chinese, Italian or Arab restaurants are good choices for testing new savors. I think cooking is an art and people enjoy cooking tasty meals. B making common or unique recipes as a hobby we can be beneficial from a delicious dish, spend spiritual time and release daily stress.

To conclude, food is the most important amenities of life. In the past eras finding and preserving food was a tough activity. Besides cooking food from fresh and uncooked materials is a laborious procedure. By evolution and advancement in technologies the process of life has became faster so we have to change the method of living. In contrast to past time employed people have limit time to prepare food so preserved and canned food make cooking easier consequently they can spend time for other intrests. So the ease of cooking has improved the life.
sevil   
Feb 5, 2014
Writing Feedback / Has ease of cooking improved life? [7]

Thank you so much
You are right, I thought so much to write in short form but I could not " the sentence you mark with red color "

what is your suggestion?
sevil   
Feb 5, 2014
Writing Feedback / Is experience better than book? [5]

Life is an arena in which every person live, study, learn and build his living. It is Difficult to determine which source of knowledge is more important. Because they are two different sources but complement and they can not be substitute with each other. In my opinion the gained knowledge from experience is more important. we learn a lot from books but our most important knowledge achieve from our experiences. Let me illustrate my supporting reasons.

First of all, both books and experience are foundation of knowledge. The knowledge that we obtain from books are theoretical and abstract. In the university we study a lot of subjects, gain general information and in some separate lessons we get deep knowledge. For example imagine an electrical engineer study electrical circuit's lesson very thorough and becomes an erudite one but are these entire theoretic education make him qualified to find a suitable career? Here is the experience complete the formal education. This well-informed student may design circuits but if this circuit will be operational? The answer is dependent upon experience which is obtained from working, encounter with problems, try to eliminate errors and modify the circuit.

The second one, the knowledge which is obtained from experiences is more effective and permanent than reading the books. Our learning of experience is distinct and first-handed whereas books are experiences and ideas of other people. They are very useful and eye opening for everyone to extract necessary information and save her/his time. For example in solving math questions having a handbook with solution of the questions is very helping but real knowledge will gain when you encounter with questions, try to solve them even you can not and find your strength and weakness. I mean by assimilating experiences and theoretical knowledge you can develop your long-lasting skills.

Conclusively, both books and experiences are powerful tools and great resources in headway of any person. They are supplemental but can not be replaced by each other. Although I agree with this expression; knowledge that is gained from experience is more important but combination of formal education with practical experience results lingering skills and lead person to be a successful and valuable one for himself/herself and society.
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