Undergraduate / Why Duke arts and sciences short essay? (any feedback will be welcome) [5]

i think its really well written. its concise, its clear why you have chosen their program. I think its right on spot.

Undergraduate / "From Bolivia" - American University Essay [10]

Smack!, my headboard resonated as I rose violently after I had a horrible realization.

The idea that all my hard work in school was quickly becoming a reality in my mind. this is an unfinished sentence

All the sacrifices I had made by continuously choosing my studies over parties, sports, and even girls, would mean nothing.

The next day, school seemed to drag on forever. Eventually, when the final bell's ringing reached my ears, I speed walked to my Hispanic Leadership Club sponsor's room.

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Undergraduate / 'In love with the sky' - Main essay. Influential experience in ur life [21]

i think that the concept of the essay is great, its really thoughtful and shows your personality. maybe you can elaborate on some of the images that you think are more significant, or use figure of speeches to make it more persuasive? im not really sure cause i already think its great.