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ten

Nov 20, 2012

Writing Feedback / Religion Studies 100 - Buddhism and Hinduism; 'concepts of rebirth' [4]

hi you have a very nice essay and its very interesting topic as for me. i m also Buddhist and glad to meet u.
Here think , actually its very hard to understant but nice reflection. As we believes that if u do some bad on other people then its reflection to u for any time. and if u do good some other people then u have good day for any time. that call equall reaction. so we must me nice person in this life and be helpful person. i m sure your next life will be wounderful life. its depen on your previous life.

thank you
your ten.

ten

Nov 21, 2012

Writing Feedback / 'USA has a lot of international students' - My ILEIST exam essay [3]

My ILEST essay topic is nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their course in foreign counties. while studying

abroad brings many benefits to indivitual students, its also brings a number of diadvantages...Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of study abroad and give your own opinion.

yes, as for me that is very rare and great opportunity for your future life. They have lots of benefits and advantage for you. But may be some student have both of advantage or disadvantage. So i think that is dapend on your understanding or thinking power.Here i have so point on both of side and have suitable example

Firstly, we must be think about your self and take for the decision for study abroad and this is not easy to what we says from your mouth.Actually they have a lots of benefits. for example, we call that USA is best education in the world and they have lots of international student.All the student want to study smart and future willl bright. if you got like this opportunity and you will sure to do same as them.

Also you have learn the other countries language and traditional.that is your advantage in you life and one more thing is you have ability to serve or service in you homeland. for exam like teach them what you learn over there and you will progress your land.

But in disadvantage, you must spend lots of money on that. If you dont have then its may be make family problem. And some student havenot come back after they finished the school and it will may be forget your countries traditional and culture. Also some student have not seen her or his parents long time. then student has not feeling for them and ignore your parents. last one is may you have no interest on study then you will sure learn bad things from there. these are the disadvantage in our life.

Finally, what i m trying to say is that is good opportunity in you futur life and do as understand student. That opportunity will makes your future bright and hope if you get this kind of chance then dont try to lose it and be helpful person in this world.

thank you

thak