Writing Feedback / Which kind of friendship and respect is required? [4]

First of all, I would like to say that this is my first essay ever, so please cooperate to improve it. Thanks in advance
Today there are lots of problems in our society like murder, smuggling, economical and social problems. In spite of those problems there is a problem which affects us inside which is friendship and respect.

As per my personal experience the friendship and respect is concern with the two main issues. First category of people is doing friendship and gives respect for money, wealth and status. It means that if he reached his goal then there is no friendship after reaching the target, there is no concern whatever good or bad is happening to you, this kind of friendship shows selfish and ambitious personality.

Secondly there is a category of people who are doing friendship and respect by heart. There is no predetermined goal in their minds which is for a long time and having successful result. They would make you physically and mentally sound and calm. And will participate and share their sympathy and good suggestions whenever, it is required.

At the end I personally believe, the friendship and respect should not be related to the person status, money and wealth. All of us are given wealth, status and money according to our destiny. I consider all the human being equally wither it will be from each country, religion and cost.

Writing Feedback / GOVERNMENT SYSTEM; Important thing I want to change in my country [2]

If you could change one important thing about your country, what would you change?

As per the change is concerned, change usually takes place whenever the activities does not go normal and having problem in achieving the results.
If I given a chance to change one important thing at my country, I will change the current governmental system which is fighting against the corruption.

There are many reasons to change the system
Firstly Afghanistan is the first country which is full of corruption among all over the world.
Secondly there were many countries who given free donation to our country but it did not had clear result , still there are many people who are living under the poverty line, the GDP growth is not growing down and we have many people who are graduated from universities and colleges but they are jobless.

Thirdly the countries and specially USA will come out from Afghanistan at 2014, the country need rapid growth, by any mean may be the extraction of the natural resources, well educated and trained army, national police and many other governmental sectors.

Lastly we have the right to live as a developed nation among others.