Writing Feedback / Raising age limit for driving license would help reduce traffic accidents [3]

The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to raise age limit for the younger drivers and to lower age limit for aged ones. Do you agree?

In today's life, there is so much traffic around the world and it is clear that traffic is the main reason for happening road accidents. It said that the best way to deal with this problem would be to limit the ages of drivers. And I totally agree with this view as there are several reasons to supply it. The main is that very young or so elder people are not able to drive and I will analyze this supporting idea in the following paragraphs.

Firs of all, in my opinion, young people have not enough experience in driving. Furthermore, the youths are always curious and because of their interest in speed they commonly forget about speed limit. As a result, the number of traffic accidents increases. Therefore, I support this statement, and the governments must raise age limit for beginner drivers in their own countries.

Secondly, elderly people are also the cause of traffic accidents. Particularly, many aged people suffer from several diseases such as headache and heart attack, and these diseases may interfere in the elderly during driving. Moreover, as we all know, nearly all aged people are impatient, and I think this also can be a case of traffic accidents. Thus, I support the idea on limiting age for elder people so that I found aged people are not able to drive.

To sum up, as I supported above it would be helpful in reducing traffic accidents, if age limit for youths was raised and for aged people was lowed.

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Writing Feedback / How can governments and individuals reduce the rate of accidents? IETLS [3]

Road accidents claim far too many lives. What can governments and individuals do to reduce this problem?

Throughout this century, road accidents happen quite frequently around the world. As a result too many damages are caused and lives are claimed by these accidents. In my opinion, there are many things that governments and individuals should do in order to reduce this problem. Some of them I will mention on the following paragraphs.

Firstly, one possible way to solve this problem would be to increase the amount of fines. Obviously, if governments increase the penalties on breaking traffic laws, then people might prevent themselves from breaking rules. As a result, the number of traffic accidents would be reduced. This is just one solution.

Another problem of road accidents is lack of special roads, especially roads for schoolchildren in my view. An alternative way to avoid road accidents is to increase the number of special roads, particularly, roads for students and schoolchildren, roads for bicycles and also reproduce the number of underground roads. For instance, there are too many schools and too many pupils in the world. It is clear that majority of road accidents are caused by children. If governments increase the special roads for children and teach them effectively to use these roads, the number of accidents is likely to go down.

If the steps above were taken on the way to prevent road accidents, I think the effects would be positive.

To sum up, there are several ways to prevent road accidents. I mentioned just some of them. Although many measures are taken road accidents still remain a problem which we all need to fight against.