Writing Feedback / IELTS;It's important to support artists,but important things should get priority [2]

hi. my name is jessica. i wnat to practice my writting so can you help me? how can i study it?

Writing Feedback / IELTS : Which behaviour of teachers is efficient; Strict or friendly? [6]

right! hihi
following me! it's not difficult to study if you dont patient, but the teacher always strict you, it's very difficult to study, i want to something comfortable and easy . but anorther guys dont obey teachers maybe they dont like strictness , if some teachers strict you study that's mean they want you study better than before. of course they during many years in order to become the teacher, they study alot . on the other hand , some teachers can require your money, this is bad side for student, the students will be subjective anything , they thinks they will be fine with the tests. it's is not good for them. i think in the future the goverment will fix this bad things.

Grammar, Usage / 'Class who is absent..' - Which is more appropriate to say? [14]

sorry can you help me about writting