Writing Feedback / parents are the first people who show the children what they should or shouldnt [7]

Topic: Some pople think that parents should teach children how to be good members of sociaety .Others, however, belive that school is the place to learn this.

Children spend most of their time at school and in their homes , where not only do they study for certain subjects but also they learn to be cizvilizied and good people .That's why i think that both teachers and parents have a great impact on children's attitude in sociaety.

To begin with, parents are the first people who show the children what they should or shouldnt say or do .They teach the children to obey some rules from their early ages as every parent's aim is to make his/her child a good member of society..Parents also influence the children with their own manners.Many times children repeat some words said by someone of their family or behave like him or her.Therefore,parents have an very important role in children's upbringing and they should be more responsible for making them a human beings with positive qualities.

On the other hand , school is the place, where children are obligated to go to and where they should obey certain rules.Except that they gain knowledge of history, biology and many other subjects , because of the school children gain many other quaities.For example, waking up early in the morning and going to school at exact hour make them more precise and doing homeworks change them to people with responsibilities.School is also the place where they learn to communicate with different personalities and due to this they become sociable.However, all this things wont be possible without the help of the teachers, who should be strict and should require more and more from their students.While they educate them they also have the task to teach them how to be a good people because in my view school is the second family of the child.

In conclusion, parents and school are equally responsible to teach children to be a good mamber of sociaety....
i dont know how to end up, pl