ranin
Nov 6, 2013
Essays / god gives my country a fashion dress; describe a spring -Need Help [3]
that was a title that teacher give it to us in the class to write an essay , in two line , but I get a low mark and I still didn't know why !
Every year in some seasons , god gives my country a fashion dress , dropping in it many bottles of perfume that making your nostril dance . the sound of nature could mummer to your ears easly . the tress were green as they could be , and the branches were swam like in the sea , the flowers are sitting everywhere you can hear them gossiping here and there
please wait your advice to tell me where I have wrong and comments to can improve myself and pleas if you can give me some sites or anythings could help my writing :(
Thanks !
that was a title that teacher give it to us in the class to write an essay , in two line , but I get a low mark and I still didn't know why !
Every year in some seasons , god gives my country a fashion dress , dropping in it many bottles of perfume that making your nostril dance . the sound of nature could mummer to your ears easly . the tress were green as they could be , and the branches were swam like in the sea , the flowers are sitting everywhere you can hear them gossiping here and there
please wait your advice to tell me where I have wrong and comments to can improve myself and pleas if you can give me some sites or anythings could help my writing :(
Thanks !