god gives my country a fashion dress; describe a spring -Need Help

that was a title that teacher give it to us in the class to write an essay , in two line , but I get a low mark and I still didn't know why !

Every year in some seasons , god gives my country a fashion dress , dropping in it many bottles of perfume that making your nostril dance . the sound of nature could mummer to your ears easly . the tress were green as they could be , and the branches were swam like in the sea , the flowers are sitting everywhere you can hear them gossiping here and there

please wait your advice to tell me where I have wrong and comments to can improve myself and pleas if you can give me some sites or anythings could help my writing :(

Thanks !

Please wait your reply as soon as possible , I have to rewrite it and give to my teacher again , you can add to the paragraph if you want

You did a good job by metaphorizing the sentence with the advantages an beauty of summer. Why not start by saying "In summer"... And correct ("bottles of perfume that making)==> bottles of perfume that make." Also consider a little form of compare and contrast between the present season and a past one.