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Posts by xsimio
Name: Adrian Simionov
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xsimio   
Feb 28, 2014
Undergraduate / UT Austin Transfer Nursing Story- I never wanted to be a nurse [2]

"more sure" is logically incorrect. You are either sure, or you are not sure. Think of a glass, if is full, can it be more full, or "fuller"?

I could also find in the dictionary the work "surer" which I did not know it exists. Maybe surer would be of a better use here?
xsimio   
Feb 28, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS, Change look is good or not? [4]

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