Writing Feedback / IELTS writing Task-2 which type of teaching is better indoor or outdoor [4]

Education is the most important part of a healthy society in general and personal life in private. Education is the process of giving the systematic information specially schools or university. There are different ways of conveying knowledge depends upon person to person. Some prefer to study at home where others love to go to school.

First of all, outdoor teaching gives the opportunities to children to learn from others in terms of cooperation, sharing thoughts with outside world and how to explore their ideas in different subjects.

Moreover in outdoor teaching the students have other students for competition so, they improve their self accordingly. More precisely, school and university students learn how to live in this multi culture society there are different types of seminar and conferences are conducted to learn social environment Furthermore they can learn the things by doing thins practically with advance infrastructure.

On the other hand some parents think that their children are safe at home so they prefer to teach their children by their own experience or via technology. Trend has been changed they use computer , online education or multimedia equipments to teach children at their place . children hold their concentration more precisely at home because there are less elements of disturbance and having less restrictions.

To sum up, we can say there are some development of students are there which they can learn from home and other they can learn from school. In outdoor education they learn to live in modern world where in indoor they learn their responsibilities related to their parents.

Writing Feedback / IELTS - teach every young person how to be a good parent [4]

TOPIC: Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.

Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent

Parenting is an art. Every young male or female should know more about the parent before having children. There are many cases in which very young women give birth to little babies, without having a clue what means to be a parent.

In addition, school should provide courses, teaching young persons to be good parents. It might seem something verb easy. Every woman or men can be a father or mother but the problem is what kind of father or mother.

On one hand, it is good idea for schools to educate youngsters about parent child relationship so that before having child they have to know what kind of ups and downs they can face as parents. Child is not a toy. a child is big responsibility this is the parents responsibilities to dense their child with love and affection. In view of these facts good parenting education makes are society healthy and intelligent

On other hand like every coin has two sides ; to learn about parent child relationship in schools are very early because students and teachers already have lots of work to do related to their own subjects so to add on one more subject is not comfortable on both sides. Moreover some times parents are also restricted students because they might think that its to early to learn about parenting

To put it in a nutshell, every youngsters has right to learn about the art of parenting because their children are their mirror image. it would be a very good idea for schools to teach young persons become good parents, as this can help young people how to handle their own problems and above all their children's problems.